My Zombie/Fiend "Dark Silence" Deck.

[+Poochyena+]

Well, if some of you don't know, I like the Yu-Gi-Oh card game. But I haven't told you what my official 2009 deck will be. It's called "Dark Silence". it contains a variety of Zombie and Fiends strictly, all being of the Dark Type. Some cards maybe somewhat new but most are from the older series. Here is what it contains:
MONSTERS (23)
2x Plague Wolf (Good to use as a one turn direct attacker)
3x Zombie Masters (Great to use its effect on other Zombie Masters)
2x Ryu Kokki (A strong Zombie monster that is great for both ATK and DEF)
3x Castle of Dark Illusions (Strong DEF and great to power up Zombies)
3x Regenerating Zombie (Great attacker)
3x Wall of Illusion (High DEF and great to send back big monsters)
2x Despair from the Dark (The powerhouse card)
2x Grave Squirmer (Perfect to destroy any card on the field)
2x Dark Ruler Ha Des (the easy-to summon high ATK monster)
2x The Bisro Butcher (Great to inflict damage to both the opponent and their deck)

SPELLS (19)
2x Malevolent Nuzzler (Good Power-Upper)
2x Paralyzing Potion (Good to freeze any high ATK monster)
2x Book of Life (The better, Zombie-Version of Monster Reborn)
3x Mystic Plasma Zone (The #1 Field Spell for this deck.)
2x Chain Energy (Great to limit the opponent's choices due to LP cost)
2x Germ Infection (Starts small, but can turn pretty ugly on ATK points)
2x Call of the Mummy (Perfect to summon a high-level first turn)
2x Ebikyo Drakmord (#1 monster-destroying spell that is hard to destroy)
2x Gravekeeper's Servant (Key Card to deck annialation)

TRAPS (12)
2x Skull Invitation (Great to combo with Gravekeeper's Servant)
2x Skull Lair (Makes the field even more unsafe to play monsters)
2x Needle Ceiling (Perfect against a full field of high ATK monsters)
2x Sakuretsu Armor ( the only Counter Trap you'll need)
2x Zoma Spirit (A high ATK trap Monster)
2x Dark Spirit of the Silent (You get to choose the attacker)

EQUALS: 54 cards

Please leave your comments on this deck or ways to make it better.
Thanks for reading!
+Poochyena+

 

[Gymnotide]

Eh Fiends and Zombies already have ample support for each type alone. When you mix them, you sacrifice a lot of what could be game-winning material. I'm not so familiar with Fiends either. What I'm missing here is the Mezuki, Plaguespreader Zombie, Pyramid Turtle, Zombie Master, etc.

And, I see no Torrential Tribute / Mirror Force.

There are also a couple of cards which you might as well swap out too.
Paralyzing Potion and Ebikyo Drakmord are better off being cards that destroy the monster outright. Subduing them temporarily not only keeps you from attacking if their monster is stronger, but your opponent can always break free from your spell. If you really wanted to, you could also Book of Life their monster away if you fear it returning.

Germ Infection, er just no. That card really sucks. It acts too slowly.

And I cbf to look at the other cards right now.

 

[Valeran]

You must have an extremely low budget, your deck is outdated even when I look at it, and I haven't been keeping up with new cards in something like 2 years.

Some key issues that I see.
-Lack of basic staples. While the Ban list is a bit too new for me I can see that you're missing a good deal of "good" (and legal) cards that can fit into any deck. If you're using basic format, you're missing a lot.
-Lack of direction. You have a few aspects of deck destruction, while the deck is seemingly aimed at normal attacking.
-More than one "theme". I'm using theme loosely here, but trying to combine Zombie and Fiends is like, combining chocolate cake and pizza, on their own they're amazing, but when you mix them up, not so much.
-Equipment cards. Often lead to dead draws, and add to deck clutter.

-Pick a deck style
-Pick a theme for the deck style
-Obtain some more basic staples.
-Remove or reduce equipment cards.

Nothing too in depth, just some helpful tips.