New song I just wrote( perhaps colaboration?)

[TMoon]

Just want to post a song I finished writing yesterday. I'd love to collaborate if given the opportunity. The song is in MIDI format and I'l be working on writing it on guitar as soon as I can. Constructive criticism is encouraged.

https://soundcloud.com/tyler-moon/logos?utm_source=soundcloud&utm_campaign=share&utm_medium=facebook

 

[TMoon]

I appreciate the feedback! I agree with you about the improvements the song could use. There's not as much structure to the song as I would like there to have been, so I'll probably go back and modify some parts. To be honest, this is my least favorite song that I've written. I'm glad someone found some enjoyment from it though!