[Other] New to scripting

[Sanic_]

It just doesn't work.
I have no idea why it doesn't.
I was good before at scripting but no I don't remember anything.

Spoiler:

#dynamic 0x071A300

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x258
if 0x1 goto @care
checkgender
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @he
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @she
release
end

#org @care
msgbox @rest 0x6
closeonkeypress
call @sleep
msgbox @restafter 0x6
release
end

#org @sleep
fadescreen 0x1
fanfare 0x100
waitfanfare
special 0x0
fadescreen 0x0
return

#org @rest
= AUNT: [player]!\nYou should take a quick rest.

#org @restafter
= AUNT: Oh, good! You and your\nPOKéMON are looking great.\lTake care now!

#org @he
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum called me she\ncant take care of you.\nIt's not your fault\nyour dad died today morning.\pShe told me that you should\ngo to proffesor Oak.

#org @she
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum died,\nand your dad couldn't\n take care ofyou\n anymore.\pHe said that you\nshould go and meet\nproffesor Oak.

I don't know why this doesn't work.

Spoiler:

#dynamic 0x071A300

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x258
if 0x1 goto @care
checkgender
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @he
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @she
release
end

#org @care
msgbox @rest 0x6
closeonkeypress
call @sleep
msgbox @restafter 0x6
release
end

#org @sleep
fadescreen 0x1
fanfare 0x100
waitfanfare
special 0x0
fadescreen 0x0
return

#org @rest
= AUNT: [player]!\nYou should take a quick rest.

#org @restafter
= AUNT: Oh, good! You and your\nPOKéMON are looking great.\lTake care now!

#org @he
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum called me she\ncant take care of you.\nIt's not your fault\nyour dad died today morning.\pShe told me that you should\ngo to proffesor Oak.

#org @she
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum died,\nand your dad couldn't\n take care ofyou\n anymore.\pHe said that you\nshould go and meet\nproffesor Oak.

 

[PurpleOrange]

I don't know why this doesn't work.

Spoiler:

#dynamic 0x071A300

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x258
if 0x1 goto @care
checkgender
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @he
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @she
release
end

#org @care
msgbox @rest 0x6
closeonkeypress
call @sleep
msgbox @restafter 0x6
release
end

#org @sleep
fadescreen 0x1
fanfare 0x100
waitfanfare
special 0x0
fadescreen 0x0
return

#org @rest
= AUNT: [player]!\nYou should take a quick rest.

#org @restafter
= AUNT: Oh, good! You and your\nPOKéMON are looking great.\lTake care now!

#org @he
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum called me she\ncant take care of you.\nIt's not your fault\nyour dad died today morning.\pShe told me that you should\ngo to proffesor Oak.

#org @she
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum died,\nand your dad couldn't\n take care ofyou\n anymore.\pHe said that you\nshould go and meet\nproffesor Oak.

1. Checkflag 0x258 isn't doing anything, a setflag needs to be used otherwise it won't go to the heal part of the script
2. using a goto command to a text message doesn't work

here's a revised script (changes in bold)

Spoiler:

#dynamic 0x071A300

#org @start
lock
faceplayer
checkflag 0x258
if 0x1 goto @care
checkgender
compare LASTRESULT 0x0
if 0x1 goto @boy
compare LASTRESULT 0x1
if 0x1 goto @girl
release
end

#org @care
msgbox @rest 0x6
closeonkeypress
call @sleep
msgbox @restafter 0x6
release
end

#org @sleep
fadescreen 0x1
fanfare 0x100
waitfanfare
special 0x0
fadescreen 0x0
return

#org @boy
msgbox @he 0x6
setflag 0x258
release
end

#org @girl
msgbox @she 0x6
setflag 0x258
release
end

#org @rest
= AUNT: [player]!\nYou should take a quick rest.

#org @restafter
= AUNT: Oh, good! You and your\nPOKéMON are looking great.\lTake care now!

#org @he
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum called me she\ncant take care of you.\nIt's not your fault\nyour dad died today morning.\pShe told me that you should\ngo to proffesor Oak.

#org @she
= AUNT: Hello [player],\nI came here because\nyour mum died,\nand your dad couldn't\n take care ofyou\n anymore.\pHe said that you\nshould go and meet\nproffesor Oak.