okay, here goes.

PokeLawry

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    I'm not sure if these are to be PKMN related or not, but mine arent. I've been writing poetry since i was a kid, I've gotten TONS better since then, of course, but i'm not THAT good. but why not. Here's a few short ones:

    "BREATHE" 12/2008
    The Devil's in the wind.
    I Cannot avoid the way it violates me
    with icy slaps to my
    bare arms and legs,
    hands and feet,
    Silently and violently inviting me
    thru my cracked window,
    with cracked ice on it,
    . . . whispering . . .
    "Why is this what you do?"







    " 'best' Friend" 10/2007
    My eyes drip
    My stomach flips
    Because of all your stupid ****.

    I get lit
    My eyes, they squint
    So that i can deal with it.

    My heart's been bit
    My soul is ripped
    No more 'friends with benefits'.









    NO TITLE 2009
    Your voice is that of a cricket;
    beautiful, yet annoying - Bittersweet.

    The mere presence of you gives me the creeps...

    You're miles and miles away;
    I Still hear you.
    I Still feel you.

    So redundant it hurts,
    Is there no peace?

    How do you know how valuable Silence is,
    When you talk for talking's sake?

    You're Impossible, and
    It ties my stomach in KNOTS.












    "SHAVE" 2007
    The shower hisses,
    and vomits on me;
    with that, comes this,
    do you see how clean i can be?

    She cannot see me, nor you - only He.

    Wash my wounds with soap, make it hurt,
    The burn and itch are best friends.

    I itch when i heal,
    then i fall flat,
    bald as a baby,

    and my skin peels;

    Slipping down the drain,
    It knows the deal.






    aaaaand Done! I know, Stupid, mostly Non-Rhyming, WHATEVS! :)
     
    I found the NO TITLE poem very clever in my opinion.
    And the poem "Breathe" isn't stupid, but I find it very confusing.
     
    TJgamer said:
    I found the NO TITLE poem very clever in my opinion.
    And the poem "Breathe" isn't stupid, but I find it very confusing.
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    thankyou. and BREATHE, It was december, I was lying on my bed, Window Open, Middle of night, cold as hell, smoking a cigarette out the window, my house was supposed to be a "no-smoking" house. That's pretty much how that poem came to be.
     
    PokeLawry said:
    thankyou. and BREATHE, It was december, I was lying on my bed, Window Open, Middle of night, cold as hell, smoking a cigarette out the window, my house was supposed to be a "no-smoking" house. That's pretty much how that poem came to be.
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    ...Oh.
    ...So I see.
    A bizarre origin I must say.
     
    again;



    I lost myself in the space between you and i.
    We've been pulled apart time after time,
    I have pieces of you mixed in
    with the pieces of me,
    unnoticed
    by everyone except myself,
    unclaimed by you.
    you are mine, forever, by default.
     
    I gotta say, it has some charm to it.
    Sorry, that's all I could say about it at the moment.
     
    i agree with biancafanboy i think its great! keep at it
     
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