Once Upon A Pok?ball (Pok?mon/ Sailor Moon)

Orange_Flaaffy

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    Posting this again. I will have a new comic out in the next couple of weeks, most likely after X-Mas. Sorry for the long break, the 14th grade is hard:D...

    Author's note:
    Since I'm posting this here (and at Serebii 'n PE2K) I'm already under the impression that you like pokemon. That's sorta a give in.
    This is a comedy sprite comic that mixes pokemon with Sailor Moon, a fandom I have loved for going on eight years now. I am using the English dub names for the majority of the characters to better appeal to readers that may have only known that form of the show. However, some knowledge (and love) of SM is recommended to better 'get' certain later comics I have stewing in my mind. Basicly, if you have never seen the SM characters being their normal selfs you most likely won?t get when they are acting ?funny? ^_^


    Intro
    ~*~Moon~*~
    7/23/05: Chapter 1: Poke!
    7/23/05: Chapter 2:Shades of meow
    7/24/05: Chapter 3: A meowth's weakness
    7/25/05: Chapter 4: The awful truth
    7/26/05: Chapter 5:The video game effect
    7/27/05: Chapter 6:You have to wonder about those backpacks
    ~*~Neptune & Uranus~*~
    7/28/05: Chapter 7: Lost in the woods
    7/29/05: Chapter 8: Be carefull how you click
    7/30/05: Chapter 9: The manga dub effect
    7/31/05: Chapter 10: Animal life
    ~*~Nephrite & Molly~*~
    8/1/05: Chapter 11: A likely couple?
    8/2/05: Chapter 12: Free Eats!
    8/3/05: Chapter 13: Life as we know it...
    ~*~Moon~*~
    8/4/05: Chapter 14: Buy pokeballs!
    8/5/05: Chapter 15: Love hurts..or, The Ash effect
    9/30/05: Chapter 16: Onix, the non-Pocket Monster
    ~*~Neptune~*~
    10/3/05: Chapter 17: Animal Life 2 or the Disney effect

    I do not own pokemon. If I did Jessie and James would be rich, running Team Rocket, and dating after all their years of hardship.
    Any similarities between this comic and any that may have come before it are not intended, while I do make this comic, I don't read as many of other people's work as I would like to. Sprites and backgrounds from La Soldier and TSR and PE2K. All other sprites are ripped and editted by me, please don't steal 'em.
    Extra note: My storylines skip around but trust me, just becuase I go to another does not mean the one I was just working on is 'done'. These are all taking place in the same pokemon world after all, at just about the same time.
     
    ah. Alot of mixing bitages. Not good you could try making some sailor moon overworlds for the comic. Theres some humour and an okay plot could use a lot of work thought its a cross over so I think you could have some more humour about this girl not knowing much about pokemon like throwing a voltrob at another pokemon thinking its a pokeball.
    you get
    4/10
     
    As Blaze stated, mixing styles is a bad idea, quite frankly the comic scores quite low in the graphic depeartment, but as I always say, never judge a book by it's cover. You seem to have a good enough plot, good grammer and spelling and a nice blend of humour to wrap it up. I would like to read this more but it really isn't my cup of tea.

    Nice try though.
    my final score: 5/10
     
    Blazin Espio said:
    ah. Alot of mixing bitages. Not good you could try making some sailor moon overworlds for the comic. Theres some humour and an okay plot could use a lot of work thought its a cross over so I think you could have some more humour about this girl not knowing much about pokemon like throwing a voltrob at another pokemon thinking its a pokeball.
    you get
    4/10
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    Trust me you do not want to see me draw my own sailor moon overworlds. I will take a middle grade of 4/5 gladly for my first ever comic. I hope to learn more in the years to come. My plot has not yet really started so you need'nt worry about that, it will get there, but many of the jokes will only make sense if you like SM as well as pokemon. I have found that fans with a history of SM fandom seem to 'get' my mix more, for all it lacks.

    vaati said:
    As Blaze stated, mixing styles is a bad idea, quite frankly the comic scores quite low in the graphic depeartment, but as I always say, never judge a book by it's cover. You seem to have a good enough plot, good grammer and spelling and a nice blend of humour to wrap it up. I would like to read this more but it really isn't my cup of tea.

    Nice try though.
    my final score: 5/10
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    Well, it is more story centered than graphic centered in a way (even when I tried writing a comic in middle=high school the story was always better than the art) , but and based on what little I know, and my various troubles with cerebral palsy and my learning disablity, this is a very good first try in my book, and I will see it though to the end no matter how long it takes me. So thank you very much for the five, it means alot to me, and this 'nice try' for mine will be around for a while, I hope to still be seeing you as a reader then :)
     
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    When 4I have the time I'll glady make the Sailor Moon OW sprites. Just drop me a PM.
     
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