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One Piece Pirates

Sheepnut

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    it is good so far but u should had more screens in a comic and also luffy should of said "gum, gum (somekind of an atack)" when he punched alvida
    anyway its good comic so far
     
    Thanks there will be anew comic tommorow.
     
    Yes Lucifont is my forum name on bobandgeorge forums.
     
    You should add a bit more...but....the story line is great!! You should give it some more orginalilty though..(did I spell that right?)
     
    Daviku, that was jus plane out mean. If ya dont hav anything nice to say, dont say nothin. Anyways, that was good. I cant wait fer the next one!
     
    Its good i guess, should try changing the story a bit would make one piece even better :P, also use possibly 6 frames, thats what i do.
     
    Lil Totodile how is that mean? He is just following the story of the anime and he is not very good with facial expressions. This isn't funny, it is pretty boring. Any person with the right sprites and backgrounds can re-create it. Davis is aloud to say that, it's not mean he's giving his honest oppinion. I would say this comic is below average.
     
    To an extent i agree with you but even still...give the guy some credit..hes new to making comics i guess.
     
    Guys it is not the story of one piece its the story of the other pirates (im starting with alvida and how she eats the slip slip fruit (expect a date movie parody)
     
    Hmm...I don't like this comic much. The facial expressions aren't that good, and there's bad grammar everywhere. :\
     
    Updated. Trust me im going somewhere with this.
     
    Rofl that was funny man, you need to speed up though, do you have Alvida in her slimmer form?
     
    Yes expect her transformation in the next 2 eps.
     
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