pink (pretty little things)

[Yesterday]

cuz I wish spring ish here... ^w^

pweety please read and review!!

"pink (pretty little things)"

pretty little things,
pink blossoms

so young to bloom
so quick to fade

so slow to fall
where children played

so brief, so frail
coy, and unafraid

lo, as it lands
on grass' blade.

 

[Lily]

I liked this one. ^_^ Your rhyming was near flawless and the whole thing overall sounded very cute, 'though I can't say I want spring to come. xD

Nice job~

 

[Natti]

Aww, that was a really nice poem! 'Twas very pretty and sweet. ^w^

 

[Yesterday]

thankees for teh comments!!! ^w^