Please, Need Help With My Team

Talon9

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    This is my netbattle team. I tried to make it so there were no ubers or legendaries. It would really help If you could help me edit it. Thanks

    Dragonite (M) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Spd / 78 SAtk
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast
    - Outrage

    Metagross @ Leftovers
    Trait: Clear Body
    EVs: 140 HP / 252 Atk / 28 Def / 90 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Agility
    - Earthquake
    - Explosion
    - Meteor Mash

    Starmie @ Petaya Berry
    Trait: Natural Cure
    EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 6 SDef
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Ice Beam
    - Psychic
    - Surf
    - Thunderbolt

    Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry
    Trait: Thick Fat
    EVs: 252 HP / 6 Def / 252 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Curse
    - Rest
    - Return
    - Shadow Ball

    Weezing (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 HP / 84 Atk / 174 Def
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Haze
    - Pain Split
    - Thunderbolt
    - Will-O-Wisp

    Heracross (M) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 2 HP / 252 Atk / 2 Def / 252 Spd / 1 SAtk / 1 SDef
    Hardy Nature (Neutral)
    - Brick Break
    - Megahorn
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance


    One of the main things I need help with is the moveset for dragonite. It's just working. Any Ideas?
     
    This is 3rd Gen D: No Grass Knots!
     
    Talon9 said:
    This is my netbattle team. I tried to make it so there were no ubers or legendaries. It would really help If you could help me edit it. Thanks

    Dragonite (M) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Spd / 78 SAtk
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast
    - Outrage

    Metagross @ Leftovers
    Trait: Clear Body
    EVs: 140 HP / 252 Atk / 28 Def / 90 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Agility
    - Earthquake
    - Explosion
    - Meteor Mash

    Starmie @ Petaya Berry
    Trait: Natural Cure
    EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 6 SDef
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Ice Beam
    - Psychic
    - Surf
    - Thunderbolt

    Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry
    Trait: Thick Fat
    EVs: 252 HP / 6 Def / 252 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Curse
    - Rest
    - Return
    - Shadow Ball

    Weezing (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 HP / 84 Atk / 174 Def
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Haze
    - Pain Split
    - Thunderbolt
    - Will-O-Wisp

    Heracross (M) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 2 HP / 252 Atk / 2 Def / 252 Spd / 1 SAtk / 1 SDef
    Hardy Nature (Neutral)
    - Brick Break
    - Megahorn
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance


    One of the main things I need help with is the moveset for dragonite. It's just working. Any Ideas?
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    Heracross' Evs are not working I mean c'mon it takes 4 EVs to get your stat up 1 point using 1 in a category does nothing.


    Snorlax shouldn't have shadow ball thats special give it Crunch if you want to kill psychic and ghost.
     
    Why sp. attack on your d-nite? You have adamant so give the evs in sp.attack and put them in speed and also replace fire blast for either aqua tail or waterfall.
     
    1 EV in each stat lol that's not even possible to raise stats in NetBattle

    Make sure Snorlax won't be trapped by Dugtrio, otherwise you'll end up being horribly sweeped by Starmie
     
    I Changed the Ev's on Heracross to something else. That was a careless error. Also, my Heracross didn't have 1 EV in each stat. It had 252 in attack, and 252 in Speed.
    Thanks for the help so far. =)
     
    Talon9 said:
    This is my netbattle team. I tried to make it so there were no ubers or legendaries. It would really help If you could help me edit it. Thanks

    Dragonite (M) @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 180 Spd / 78 SAtk
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast
    - Outrage

    Fine. I prefer HP Flying over Fire blast, but oh well. And run Jolly.

    Metagross @ Leftovers
    Trait: Clear Body
    EVs: 140 HP / 252 Atk / 28 Def / 90 Spd
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Agility
    - Earthquake
    - Explosion
    - Meteor Mash

    Weird EVs, might wanna fix those. Set is fine.

    Starmie @ Petaya Berry
    Trait: Natural Cure
    EVs: 252 Spd / 252 SAtk / 6 SDef
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Ice Beam
    - Psychic
    - Surf
    - Thunderbolt

    Leftovers>Petaya Berry. You lack a spinner, so rapid spin over psychic.

    Snorlax (M) @ Chesto Berry
    Trait: Thick Fat
    EVs: 252 HP / 6 Def / 252 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Curse
    - Rest
    - Return
    - Shadow Ball

    Again, the EVs are wrong. I'm just too lazy to remember 'em. I belive it runs careful...

    Weezing (M) @ Leftovers
    Trait: Levitate
    EVs: 252 HP / 84 Atk / 174 Def
    Impish Nature (+Def, -SAtk)
    - Haze
    - Pain Split
    - Thunderbolt
    - Will-O-Wisp

    thunderbolt? Eh, there are better substitutions. I like flamethrower personally.

    Heracross (M) @ Salac Berry
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 2 HP / 252 Atk / 2 Def / 252 Spd / 1 SAtk / 1 SDef
    Hardy Nature (Neutral)
    - Brick Break
    - Megahorn
    - Rock Slide
    - Swords Dance

    salac Berry is epic fail on heracross really. CBcross is by far the best heracross set, though it you want to run SD, I'd just say lefties. and what the hack is with the EVs?

    One of the main things I need help with is the moveset for dragonite. It's just working. Any Ideas?
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    Eh. Heracross might give you trouble...you need a heal beller though...
     
    Typically Jolly is better on Dragonite than Adamant, from what I know about him.

    Just a general question: would Dragon Claw be better than Outrage? Because doesn't Outrage allow a Skarmory to come in and set up Spikes/ Stealth Rock/etc. ?
     
    Was so used to doing 4th gen rates I forgot dragon claw is special O_O

    Replace with Brick break or something...maybe if you replace fire blast with HP flying, you could "relocate" fireblast to the last slot. lol
     
    Dragonite @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 200 Spd / 58 SAtk
    Lonely Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast/Hidden Power Flying
    - Rock Slide

    This Dragonite set should be more helpful. The speed should give a better boost and there's always Hidden Power Flying instead of Fire Blast. But Fire Blast should be useful with the nature not blocking the Sp Atk.
     
    Dragonite has enough SAtk that it can run with jolly...lol, I think. But it really needs the extra speed.
     
    Bleach and Sunshine said:
    Dragonite @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 200 Spd / 58 SAtk
    Lonely Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast/Hidden Power Flying
    - Rock Slide

    This Dragonite set should be more helpful. The speed should give a better boost and there's always Hidden Power Flying instead of Fire Blast. But Fire Blast should be useful with the nature not blocking the Sp Atk.
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    0.o hmm? Why does Dragonite need a Lum Berry? I see no cause for Confusion.

    And I believe lonely is +Attack - Defense
     
    Azonic said:
    0.o hmm? Why does Dragonite need a Lum Berry? I see no cause for Confusion.

    And I believe lonely is +Attack - Defense
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    Usually for annoying WoW, toxic, and thunder wave users.

    I prefer lefties, cuz itz leik, da bomb! But it really is. Lum is perfectly fine.
     
    Azonic said:
    0.o hmm? Why does Dragonite need a Lum Berry? I see no cause for Confusion.

    And I believe lonely is +Attack - Defense
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    You are correct on the nature. I just forgot to edit that. -.-

    Lum Berry helps Dragonite more than it seems. Rather than confusion.

    Dragonite has 245 Special Attack with an nature that leaves the special attack alone. I suggest that you leave the nature alone.

    Starch that....

    Dragonite @ Lum Berry
    Trait: Inner Focus
    EVs: 252 Atk / 200 Spd / 58 Sp Atk
    Naughty Nature(-Sp Def +Atk)
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
    - Fire Blast/Hidden Power Flying/Thunderbolt
    - Rock Slide
     
    Pick on Dragonite's Defense stat since Dragonite can actually take a Special Attack. Its base SDefense is 100, I believe
     
    Azonic said:
    Pick on Dragonite's Defense stat since Dragonite can actually take a Special Attack. Its base SDefense is 100, I believe
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    whcih helps in dealing with weaker ice beams, like ones from starmie. I usually run adamant anyways, even if I use a special attack, and just add some EVs.
     
    I've made some changes, and I will post the edited team when I do. The only thing is, I like the items on Heracross and Starmie. They both have proved to make a difference in the game, so I am hesitant to change them. Thanks for the help from all of you =)
     
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