Please Rate My Team! D:

[Magical Dinosaur o3o]

Well I havn't had a team rated before so I thought I might as well put my team up to the forums mercy. So here it is...
1. Torterra Lv. 61
Serious
-Crunch
-Rock Slide
-Earthquake
-Razor LEaf
2. Luxray Lv. 58
Quiet
-Thunder Fang
-iron Tail
Swagger
-Crunch
3. Staraptor L. 59
Brave
-Defog
-Fly
-Close Combat
-Toxic
4. Garchomp Lv. 59
Sassy
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-Dragon Claw
-Fire Fang
5. Lucario Lv. 57
Naughty
-Dragon Pulse
-Sword Dance
-Shadow Claw
-Aura Shpere
6. Golduck Lv. 57
Lonely
-Disable
-Psychic
-Surf
-Aerial Ace

 

[CrasH]

that staraptor is terrible lol. get rid of fly and defog <.<;

 

[Cactus Twist]

I don't think I would go with a speed lowering nature on staraptor, go adamant instead.

 

[dad123]

first try to get new pokemon and ev train em,

so far i would rate 4/10

 

[Shiny Umbreon]

This fits better in Strategies & Movesets.

-MOVED-

 

[luke]

first try to get new pokemon and ev train em,

so far i would rate 4/10

Stop giving number rates. They do nothing to help the person. So stop.

 

[El Gofre]

Wow, this mite take a while:
*We need EVs! Levels really dont matter
*Post items
*The natures are all wrong, rebreed
*NEVER use 2-turn moves
*Defog is pointless seeing as there is usually an evasion clause
*You have no walls
*The only special orientated attacker in your team is golduck, who has very little coverage.

So yeah, all that needs changing. Look round the stickies for how to change that stuff.

 

[luke]

Wouldn't of approved this if I had the chance. Please revise your team and post again in this section.