Please Rate my team

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    I think I'm lacking in walls, so I'm taking suggestions.
    Please don't be too harsh, I'm a noob.

    Garchomp-Adamant-Choice Scarf
    Crunch
    EQ
    Stone Edge
    Dragon Claw
    357/388/203/154/205/301

    Electivire-Adamant-Expert Belt
    Thunder Punch
    Ice Punch
    Cross Chop
    EQ
    292/377/156/203/206/289

    Umbreon-Bold-Leftovers
    Mean Look
    Toxic
    Moonlight
    Baton Pass
    149/316/156/328/166

    Salamence-Modest-Choice Specs
    Draco Meteor
    Dragon Pulse
    Flamethrower
    Hydro Pump
    332/275/195/350/194/299

    Infernape-Jolly-Expert Belt
    Flare Blitz
    Stone Edge
    Close Combat
    Swordsdance
    291/307/176/203/178/346


    Sixth Spot is Blank. I need recommendations.
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    Garchomp and Salamence on the same team is a bit much, especially with no Ice resistance on the team. And your team is far to attack orientated, Weavile dispatches almost all your pokemon without blinking an eye.

    Also stats are meaningless, it's much better to list the EVs and if relevant IVs.
     
    Thanks, so which one do you think that I should throw out?
     
    Well if you throw Salamence out, you need another special sweeper, and if you lose Garchomp, well you have 2 physical sweepers beside him so I suppose Garchomp
     
    I think I'm lacking in walls, so I'm taking suggestions.
    Please don't be too harsh, I'm a noob.

    Garchomp@Choice Scarf
    Lonely
    252 Atk, 224 Spd, 32 Sp. Atk
    Fire Blast / Fire Fang
    EQ
    Stone Edge
    Outrage

    If you are running Choice Scarf, Outrage, and if you run Fire Blast, use the nature and EV's stated, otherwise Adamant and 252/252 Atk/Spd.


    Electivire@Expert Belt
    Lonely
    252 Atk, 176 Spd, 80 Sp. Atk


    Thunderbolt
    Ice Punch
    Earthquake
    Cross Chop

    If you don't run Fire Blast on Garchomp, then run Thunderbolt on Electivire. (For Skarmory) Otherwise, the same nature and EV's are Garchomp (Adamant)

    Umbreon@Leftovers
    Impish
    252 HP, 184 Def / Sp. Def, 72 Def / Sp. Def


    Mean Look
    Baton Pass
    Toxic
    Wish

    Good other than the EV's and moveset. Wish over Moonlight, so you can BP it to a pokemon to give protection when passing into an attack from the pokemon you trap with Mean Look.

    Salamence@Choice Specs
    Modest
    252 Sp. Atk, 252 Spd, 6 HP

    Flamethrower
    Draco Meteor
    Dragon Pulse
    Hydro Pump

    Good.


    Infernape@Focus Sash
    Naive
    252 Sp. Atk, 216 Spd, 42 Atk

    Close Combat
    Grass Knot
    Flamethrower
    Stone Edge

    Mix-Ape, because you don't need 3 Physical Sweepers.


    Sixth Spot is Blank. I need recommendations.

    Dusknoir@Leftovers
    Careful
    252 HP, 180 Sp. Def, 78 Def

    Fire Punch
    Pain Split
    Will-o-Wisp
    Brick Break / Ice Punch

    Counters Exploders and Heracross, which you need badly. Pain Split to heal, and Will-o-Wisp for those Physical Sweepers that cause you grief. (Other than Heracross, never WoW on Cross, for obvious reasons... o.0)
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    Ok, hopefully that helps somewhat.

    Regards,

    ~T_S

    first of all if your using Garchomp as an opener replace stone edge with Fire fang if it isn't an opener you can keep stone edge.

    Second of all your Salamence has a bad move set, i can see where your coming from but you have made one critical mistake you gave it Dragon Pulse and Draco Meteor, get rid of dragon pulse for either HP Fighting (or other) or Brick Break. don't go saying but its a special sweeper, if its a special sweeper then Brick Break is a good way to score a cheep shot. well it's allot better than wasting a move spot with Dragon Pulse.

    That is Specs-Mence. Draco Meteor is for early game hits, and 1HKO's, and Dragon Pulse is for late-game, or for a move that has STAB but doesn't have the added decrease of Sp. Atk like Draco Meteor. Having a Modest nature with no Atk EV's and getting stuck on a Brick Break is stupid. Also, why would you use HP Fighting? Blissey? Draco Meteor and Dragon Pulse would do more damage because of STAB anyway... o.0

    Also your Infernape is also bad, well not so bad just a bit underdone ether remove Swords Dance which i don't like to do, so if you want to keep Swords Dance remove Expert Belt for Focus Sash that way you can use Swords Dance with out fear of a knock out.
    And note for Angelic Diablo who told you to get rid ether Mence or Chomp if you have to pokemon week against ice DON'T SWITCH THEM IN AGAINST ICE DEALING FOE'S duh.

    Thankyou for stating the obvious. Angelic Diablo is 10 times the rater you are. Both have 4x Ice Weakness, and are owned by Weavile. Besides, the poster has 3 Physical Sweepers! He only needs two at the most, think will you?

    Also i don't get why you have an Electivire because there is no threat of electric moves for Electivire to wall. a Metagross is a very good pokemon for your team and as a physical wall I'll give yo a set now
    Metagross @ Shucaberry/leftovers/ focus sach, Adamant
    Agility
    Zen Headbutt
    EQ
    Thunder Punch
    Ev's HP 118, Att 152, Def 152, SPD 88
    also note that i don't have Meteor Mash i have Zen Headbutt instead because meter mash has a miss rate of 15% wich is the only reason i chose Zen Headbutt as my STAB move.

    Ok, Electivire covers 13 of 17 types for Super Effective Damage. As well as that, Meteor Mash also has the chance of upping your Attack, that is why it is used. You don't seem to have a problem with Stone Edge on Infernape or Garchomp do you?

    And for your sixth pokemon i recommend a Blissey and don't call me old and predictable until you see what i propose and why.
    Blissey @ leftovers, Modest, Natural Cure
    Softboiled
    Ice Beam
    Thunderbolt
    Aromatherapy/Stealth Rock/Thunderwave
    HP 253, SP.A 253, SPD 4
    this is a special sweeper Bliss set up very rarely used but it works, send it out against a pokemon with low SP.D and own it. its really only a set up for cheap shots it also works as a special wall it is a Blissey after all.

    Ah ha ha ha ha! lol, this is sig material. Blissey dies without 252 Def EV's, the Speed isn't going to help it against anything, and the Modest Nature doesn't do jack. It isn't going to beat anything else with that set, just get KO'd Easier. At least if you're going to have Bolt-Beam then run Clam Mind and the normal Spread... Seriously, learn something...

    well thats my two cents ask me if your not quite shore on anything k
    cya

    Ok, I'm asking... I'm not sure on everything you say. If you don't understand, don't post, simple as that.

    Please don't listen to him, listen to Angelic Diablo, he knows what he is talking about.

    Regards,

    ~T_S
     
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    Thanks for the comments, I'll take out the Garchomp and find another special sweeper or wall.
     
    Thanks for the comments, I'll take out the Garchomp and find another special sweeper or wall.

    Replace with a Special Wall. Blissey is good, but please don't listen to the idiot.

    Blissey@Leftovers
    Bold
    252 HP, 252 Def, 6 Sp. Def
    Serene Grace

    Softboiled
    Ice Beam
    Aromatherapy
    Seismic Toss / Thunder Wave

    Seismic Toss is only from an Emerald Move Tutor, so if you don't feel like doing tons of breeding in Emerald to just get the attack, the Thunder Wave is fine.

    Regards,

    ~T_S
     
    Unfortunately, Tortured is right. LORD's advice was just, just horrible. I urge you to listen to Angelic, as he said everything that needs to be said.

    Calling him an idiot wasn't needed, though...
     
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