Ruby hack: Pok?mon Frozen Flame

[Hacker42r/sT]

:_:name:_:
Pokemon Frozen Flame

:_:Hack of:_:
Pokemon Ruby

:_:changes:_:
all new gym leaders with different pokemon
all new maps
all pokemon from other games will be availible
gym leaders will give you pokemon when you beat them

:_:Storyline:_:
you are moving to a new town and you are going to live next to one of the most powerful names in pokemon, Professor Crow. You find out that a new ice age is coming and you need to stop it before it happens, you find out that the legendary charmanders flame has been frozen solid and you need to get it back to save everyone.

:_:Screenshots:_:

:_:maps:_:

<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/town2.jpg">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/route1.jpg">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/littleroot.jpg">

<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/route2.jpg">

<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/town3.jpg">

:_:in game:_:
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/boy.png">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/girl.png">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/snowing1.png">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/snowing2.png">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/snowing3.png">
<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/snowing4.png">

:_:more updates soon:_:

 

[Recknin]

cool nice hack, keep it up

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

I decided to degunk the thread of the HTML use you put in, because HTML doesn't work on PC. Then, I approved it and allowed it to be listed. If you want, you can make further edits and such.

… I probably did it because I thought the screenshots were awesome. =o

thankyou, and sry i didnt know html didnt work

and thankyou too, recknin

 

[Chris-h11]

Do you need any help with anything?

 

[Razuiberri]

I looks nice, I'll have to try it out some time.

 

[jc_rcw]

Looks really nice, keep it up.

 

[[-~Crystal-Aurora~-]]

Cool hack, when are you releasing a Beta?

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

umm. hopefully soon at least when i get all the maps done, and when i edit most of the gym leader sprites and info, oh and text editing, so probably in a week or so

 

[DarkFear]

Looks pretty good. Keep it up. Are you sure you still want the part where your mom pulls you into the house? Not much people like it.

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

will it mess the game up at all when you get rid of it?

 

[DarkFear]

Why don't you make a copy of the patch just in case it gets mucked up and try it?

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

ok i might..........too short

 

[ff6man]

Nice hack Hacker42r/sT looks good

 

[KoBRe LaiR]

Hmm... nice hack. Could use some more improvemnet on your mapping like in here:

Like on this map above, all that I marked in red circles need either improvemnet or just a good use of your tiles. You have to know what tile connects to what. For example that Sign you have has a grass background and you have it surrounded by ground. That doesnt really seem too pleasing to someone who wants to play the hack, at least it doesnt to my eyes.
Then your steps used on the maps are all the left step tile. There is anotehr tile that can be used to add the rest of them. SOme of your cliff tiles dont even connect like the ones on the tree.
I'm just commenting on how your maps looks when I first see it. Overall for that map I would give it a 2.5/10. Not very pleasing to the eye.
It takes a while to make a good map, but you should keep trying.
Why not try to make it a grassy area isted of cliff? I mean keep the outside shading but use grass path instead of the ground path.

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

oo good some criticism
i like your idea about the grass path ill try it

<img src="https://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d147/tguitarplyr182/corrections.jpg" alt="Image hosted by Photobucket.com">

what should i do with the other circled parts, and are the corrections i made good?

 

[KoBRe LaiR]

criticism helps at times, and dont take it the wrong way but I always critize maps around here. lol its just teh way I am. I just have this thing for people's maps and my mapping as well.
ANyways if you need any help with mapping, I'm just one PM away. So don't hesitate to ask me for help.

 

[Hacker42r/sT]

yeah i like criticism, thanks!!

 

[brotlov]

Wow this looks really good Hacker42r/sT I like the title and the story the most.

 

[Innocence]

it looks er-unique. It has good potential though. No offence, actually the opposite, this looks quitw good!

 

[Rukario_911]

Hmm... nice hack. Could use some more improvemnet on your mapping like in here:

Like on this map above, all that I marked in red circles need either improvemnet or just a good use of your tiles. You have to know what tile connects to what. For example that Sign you have has a grass background and you have it surrounded by ground. That doesnt really seem too pleasing to someone who wants to play the hack, at least it doesnt to my eyes.
Then your steps used on the maps are all the left step tile. There is anotehr tile that can be used to add the rest of them. SOme of your cliff tiles dont even connect like the ones on the tree.
I'm just commenting on how your maps looks when I first see it. Overall for that map I would give it a 2.5/10. Not very pleasing to the eye.
It takes a while to make a good map, but you should keep trying.
Why not try to make it a grassy area isted of cliff? I mean keep the outside shading but use grass path instead of the ground path.

yes i agree i think you need to edit the tilesets. (oh i forgot i'm soposed to be retired)