Poke Pursuit

Bluefox06

Breeder and RPGer
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    OK my first sprite comic EVEVER so cut me some slack.
    I need some advice so i can make them better if you want.
    WARNING: The random comic is not a series.
    Also, my comics are very clean. ( Not a bad word in site sep for
    like fugly or ZOMG )

    Random Comics

    Growlithe and Charmander

    Poke Pursuit

    Plot: A girl named Amy and her new friends take on a journey to wondrous places. They run in to truoble lots or just plain stupid stuff. Later in the series, they find a destucteve pokemon on pursuit and must fight for there lives.

    Intro

    The journey begins !!!

    Who's He ??

    New ones are coming soon
     
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    Aw, man... I said that you should've told showed it to me first so i can tell youy some Not-To-Do's such as...

    Not saying that it's jsut your first and to cut you some slack
    Saving as JPEG
    Blurry text, overlapping Boxes and such.
     
    ????
    jegp??? wats that .. ohhh like saving it on images instead
     
    No offense but this is very poorly made, on top of that you keep saving in JPEG format, it ruins the comic completely, try saving your comics as PNG.
     
    wat is PNG and JPEG ????
    Im kinda new to tis !!
    Im not exacly sure how to make this :(
     
    Okay I will explain this as easily and simple as I possibly can...they are image file types what you've been saving in is this...

    Code: 
    https://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g149/youtube_2006/Episode1PokePursuit.jpg

    Notice the .jpg, and what I save in is .png, understand?
     
    No no...when you save your file it asks what file type to save it as...most likely it saves it in bmp and then photobucket changes it to jpeg...so try and save it as a png instead...when it asks you what file type you want to save it as.
     
    If you need any help with sprites Larvatar breeder, I'd be glad to help! By the way, Nice work for your first comic. Originality is a plus in some areas.
     
    I agree with the rest, but you might not want to do the --Her house and the --Prof. Oaks house because it's just a waste. Also you have *drumroll*... HORRID RECOLORS!! The text is sometimes cut off, and it gets blurry in jpeg.
     
    :( that makes me sad sniff. Why so u have to be so mean Maelstorm? That wasint very nice, im just a starter :( I think the look good :(
     
    no offence, but he's right, just ask any spriter about when they started, they will say the were told that they need mass improvement, so use it as a lesson, not as an insult
     
    well..... ok
    I made a new and a little better on, ill think of making them look better
     
    Yes, it's in PNG. but it's still pretty darn bad.

    HORRIBLE GRAMMAR!!!
    You either didn't copy sprites all the way, or you can see pieces of other sprites.
    Text is overlapping the box, which are overlapping both eath other and the panel.
    Not so good of a plot.
    Why is Oak in the corner fo a Poke'Center, and when did Oak greet her, you skipped the conversation 0.o

    IN my opinion, even though it has yet to (possibly) get better, 2/10
     
    I'll work on it ok jeese.
    I'm the worst grammar student in my class so CUT ME SOME SLACK
     
    ...

    I got nothing more to say than...you phail at comics.

    I ask of you to do either of the following:

    1) Leave the comic forum, now.
    2) Find a tutorial and study it, HARD.
    3) LISTEN to my advice.

    1. NEVER. EVER. EVER. Make a comic if you do not know how to spell "bye". EVER.
    2. If the comic doesn't show actions...it isn't much of a comic, no?
    3. Learn text bubbles. MEMORIZE TEXT BUBBLES.
    4. Make a default pannel, and stick to that Pannel. You're obviously not skilled enough to make a comic using different pannel sizes, so use the same one each comic...please..

    This is the basic info for now. However, knowing you, you'll start bashing me. Too frikkin bad, if you get worked up about this, you're obviously not ready for the world.
     
    :( huuuu thats just it.
    I try to have fun and make people have fun reading my comics but i guees all that hard work was for nothing.
    If nobody likes my comics i guess ill just quit and show other people who enjoy having peole try to have fun. :( I guess..... I'm just a loser sigh
     
    ur not a loser, and u guys CALM THE F**K DOWN, she's a begginer, i bet u guys did just as worse when u started out
     
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