Poke Pursuit

[Domin-8]

Alright, lets see.
1. Use speech bubles instead of boxes next to a picture, makes it easier to read.
2. Everything else everyone else has said.

@Jake:My comic was pretty decent when I first started, some here may remember it was called Pokemon Destiny Arrived, but I got rid of it last year so doubt it is still around on the forum

 

[Bluefox06]

Thanks Jake... Im makin a new series.
By the way just to let you know...... IM A GIRL te he

 

[Fox♠]

Sheesh, you're whining linke a baby, when i first started spriting the comments I got were 100 times worse than these ones, on a forum where a lot of tough critics and just plain flamers hung out, but I never threw no hissy fit saying "I may aswell just quit" I just stuck to my guns and followed people's advice, even if it was harsh, I still took it with a pinch of salt.

Basically, you need to learn how to spell / use basic grammar, it isn;t that hard to run a spell or grammar check in MS Word. Also don;t use TUP, it looks horrid, as does the comic, basically, you just need an awful lot of practice.