Pokemon Beyond

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    This fic is quite Star Wars like.
     
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    I will post the character's pics if I have the time
     
    The age introduction in the very first post sorta took off my mood of reading this so I just skimmed on a few chapters. The whole point of placing those age intro did the following to me: 1) Made me think that this will be one of those anime-like episodes (which, as a Pokemon Manga fan, am not really fond of...) 2) Knew that Gary was somewhere in the story, about to make a dramatic appearace and 3) Takes off my mood quite a bit.

    You can at least tell the age of the character when describing characters.

    Sixteen-year-old Ash Ketchum brushed the soft, yellow fur of his old pal, Pikachu.

    Hmm...also, I thought Pikachu was a mouse rather than a racoon... O_O

    As for posting pics of the characters, it is best to describe the characters thoroughly first so that we can have a visual picture in our mind...and if you do finishe the story, that's the best time to post the picture of the characters.
     
    When Pikachu snarls his teeth look like a raccoon or a my cat when she yawns
     
    Would you like the characters drawn in anime form or life drawing form
     
    When I meant asthmatic I meant, breathing with a lot of sounds

    <Galactic Empire Theme>
     
    Prologue


    What makes a human a human? Is it his origins? No, he is born from a father and mother and conceived thru a mammalian womb. But the right answer is the internal human factor that makes one a human. But It takes more than looks to determine this factor. Any the human race plagued with discrimination, intolerance, impatience has clouded his judgment over those unique few of his own kind, even if they are basically humans but unable to blend in, not because they don?t want to, is that they simply can?t. Many die or suffered greatly, these people often had to do the inevitable just survive in a cold, unfeeling world.

    Pusan, South Korea, was a bustling city even in the night. With hot springs, beaches and more, this city was another jewel in the South Korea?s crown.

    But on this night, where it?s usually crowded, it was especially noisy not with laughter but with engine noises of military trucks and the treads of tankers. Soon, the area was filled with a multitude of soldiers, equipped with guns, anti-air missiles and high voltage electricity and missile weapons mounted on rugged Pokemon.

    <The human conversations below are Korean until further noted>

    ?ATTENTION! ? ordered the General. His eyes reveal seriousness yet also a tint of pessimism. ?Do your people have a desire to protect? Remember everyone fights no one quits. If you?re lazing around, you answer to either Team Rocket or my rifle. YOU GET ME?!?

    ?YES, SIR!!?His recruits replied in unison.

    Suddenly, the echo of a roaring beast and the stomping of the earth shaken the men?s seriousness, causing them to get a little fearful. The Pokemon apparently have more sensitive ears, pointed their man-made weapons at the direction of the sound.

    At once, a huge hotel exploded into flames and among the tongues of flames a shadow, 33 metres tall with crocodile-like eyes trod thru the rubble sending tremors on the ground. As it moved out the flames, uncharred by the high temperatures, the question to its identity was answered. The distinctive long nailed front claws, crocodile scale armor, and glowing yellow veins and shorter nailed toes were features of one creature: Groudon. People usually would see the appearance of Groudon as a sign of good luck as always. But this time, it was a sign of terror because they knew that this Groudon is fighting on the side of? Team Rocket.

    The reptile walked on its fours as it stomped thru the city. ?FIRE! FIRE! FIRE!? At once missiles, bullets, Hyper Beams and ranged Pok?mon attacks came at Groudon. As the weapons and attacks hit it, smoke clouded the scene. When the scene got too dusty for visibility, the soldiers waited for the dust to settle before retreating or attacking.

    Suddenly, the smoke blew towards them very swiftly. The general was in shock as the smoke dispersed. The ?Groudon? was actually a land transport for Team Rocket disguised in an organic covering! The mouth of the ?Groudon? opened up, it was empty except for a one Arthro Trooper. The soldiers aimed their guns at the only Team Rocket Arthro Trooper covered in black high impact armor made from the same polymer as insect exoskeleton. The flexible parts are made of spider webbing which was tough as steel.
    (The Korean ends here)

    ?Fallen for the old Trojan horse trick, haven?t you?? he said. The general aimed his rifle at the Arthro Trooper and ordered, ?This is Korean territory, I order you to leave Korea or we?ll open fire!? Suddenly, the Arthro Trooper took out his blade shaped like an Egyptian scimitar. He switched the laser on and sliced the rifle to two. The parts of the rifle fell on the ground glowing red from the heat of the trooper?s scimitar. This was a clue to the trooper?s identity. The General fell down in fear muttered, ?Manterror?!?. To protect the General, the Korean soldier fired at Arthro Trooper.

    Like a sci-fi movie, the bullet froze in hang time in front of him and fell like pearls! ?Pathetic!! Let me demonstrate how it?s done!? The same Arthro Trooper gathered a blob of water between his palms and shot out minarets of sharp ice. Many soldiers got stabbed by the ice particles and died. The general and his remaining soldiers retreated promptly.

    ?Where would you go now? General? You are going to run out of power in just a few minutes.? The Arthro Trooper taunted. General instantly got his message and look at a distant round dome-shaped building, ?Troops! Protect the Power Plant! On the double!? he shouted. The Korean Soldier soldiers got on their vehicles and sped to the Fusion Power Plant as quickly as their vehicles could take them. ?Look how they run!!? the Arthro trooper looked on.

    It was too late, a loud roar echoed across the streets. A real organic Groudon was trotting towards the Fusion Power Plant at a considerable speed. As the Pok?mon and humans alike rush to protect the power plant, their heart rate increased with every breath they took. Missiles, bullets and Hyper Beams deflected off Groudon?s armor with little damage sustained. ?General Ron to base. Mayday! Mayday! Groudon is moving a speed of 8 knots towards Pusan Fusion Power Plant. Request for backup I repeat request for back u..PPPe!!! Suddenly, a horde of Beedrills and Venomoths obviously trained by Team Rocket swamped on the jeepers and punctured their stingers into metal and human skin alike. The Venomoths on the other hand gave the Pok?mon a big headache or a big nap with sleep-inducing chemicals.

    Many soldiers and Pok?mon were injured either by the Venomoths? mental dojo or by the venom of the Beedrills. The insects? trainers, a group of Arthro Troopers stationed at the site, appeared and captured the remaining troopers. The Korean army had no choice but surrender. ?We will not allow the planet to run dry of hydrogen in exchange for kilowatts of power. Say goodbye to your environmentally unfriendly toys.? Said a Team Rocket scientist, Dr. Scorpion.

    Strangely, Groudon stopped her advance onto the power plant; she was awaiting orders from her trainer. Team Rocket led their prisoners back to the ?organic? transport, which took off and hovered over the city.

    ?Groudon! Demolish that thing!? The scimitar holding Arthro Trooper ordered. The surrendered soldiers and their General looked on helplessly as a real-live Groudon raises her claws to tear open the power plant. Debris flew in all directions and the dome-shaped power plant began to witness its own demise?not with a whimper?but a huge bang. After opening a hole in the thick metal building, Groudon burrowed quickly into the Earth as the magnetic constrainers fail and the hydrogen isotopes burn and exploded. The everything within a 100 metres was burnt to a crisp but the steam produced by the hydrogen combustion put out the flames quickly.

    The Arthro Trooper that threatened the General earlier looked on and got a little anxious about something. ?Groudon, are you okay?? he sent his telepathic message. From the ashes of the power plant, Groudon emerged from the debris and gave a roar of triumph, answering his question. ?You Team Rocket will never get away with this!? The General argued back restrained by cuffs made of exoskeleton. The Arthro trooper looked on at the General ?It is you people that drives Team Rocket in the first place! There are many people in this world, Ex-criminals, mutants, the unfortunate, only a few receive what they should have while the majority died or suffer mentally or physically under people like you!!? He answered?

    This special man behind the insectoid mask was none other than Jack Magnus, A name not to be forgotten in WW3.
     
    Boy, Man to Old Man

    3 years before the beginning of the first episode of Pok?mon

    In a huge conference hall, thousands of red-uniformed people sat to witness a historical event, among the spectators was a red-hair man in his prime sitting on the highest platform of the hall with his two sons. One of the boys was more close to the father with the other being a little gloom and nervous.

    This place obviously was one of Team Magma?s many hideouts. The red-haired man was Maxie, their ambitious leader.

    ?Esteemed members of Team Magma! I, Dr. Edward Scor have found the solution to our power problems. Right here! I will create a successful fusion reaction that will provide cheap and clean energy for generations to come.? Says a Team Magma scientist, Dr. Scor, a name that is oblivious to the world at that time. ?Now for my assistant!? Dr. Scor uncovered 6 metal spider-like arms attached to a metal control pad which had a ?tail?. The scientist removed his shirt and fastened the metal device to his rib cage and spinal cord. Little did he knew, that this time it would be permanently stuck for life.

    As nervous electricity slowly flow thru the circuits in the arms, the arms and the tail came to life and gave a wave the spectators who chorused ?Whoa!? in unison. ? Alright! Dr. Scor! Get on with the experiment!? Maxie was an impatient man and could not wait for the scientist. Dr. Scor then walked to the 3 metre tall contraption. Using his tail and 6 arms, Dr. Scor began to activate his experiment. This would be his downfall or his triumph so he wasted no time. He then took a small cylinder containing gases. ?The hydrogen isotopes, tritium and deuterium, are the two ingredients for this experiment. This is the same process that powers the Sun and stars. Well, lets get on with it!? Dr. Scor was aware of Maxie?s impatience and released the gases from their cylinders into a transparent dome-shaped container. Finally, Dr. Scor aimed his laser from his ?tail? to heat the gases.

    Lasers heated the gases to astronomical temperatures while the dome-like container closed to prevent any precious gas from escaping. Dr. Scor?s 6 arms induced magnetism to control the flying electrons and plasma. To make sure that, Maxie knows what he was looking that. He connected a port to one of arms and projected it to a huge TV screen. A small sun-like mass of gas was inside the dome, burning like the sun.

    ?Fusion Reaction successful! ? his computer reminded. A thunderous applause echoed thru the hall.

    Suddenly, the dome crumbled slowly towards the object it was containing. Dr. Scor tried to remove his mechanical arms but it seemed to be stuck to the dome. The Team Magma members moved away from Dr. Scor cowardly ignoring the scientist?s cries for help!!

    ?Jack! Where are you going?!? Maxie called out to his eldest son who just happened to be Dr. Scor?s best friend. Jack was running towards the scientist who was still trying to get his hands off!! The dome was melting as it got crumbled even more, touching the ?sun? in the middle of the core. ?Dr. Scor!? Jack cried out. ?Jack! Run!? Dr. Scor warning Jack to get away. ?No!? Jack pulled all he could to free Dr. Scor from a certain doom! It was useless.

    Jack then took up an emergency axe from the red box on the hall?s pillar and hacked the hydrogen isotope cylinders. A huge explosion occurred?

    Present Day, 8 years after the first episode of Pokemon

    ?Code Red!? came the alarm and with it came the marching footsteps of men in black high impact uniform. The monotonous sea of men in black seemed to fill their specialized designed trucks with very little color for the eyes. But there standing on the lap of a certain man in black was a creature? a yellow furred mammal packed with electricity. Visible above its twitching ears was its trainer?s name tack engraved the name, Ash Ketchum?

    The metal symbol of a beast?s head shone brightly on the uniform of every of the men, the Wild Force, a less well-known department of the Pok?mon G-men, which specializes in dealing with rogue Pok?mon that attack people.

    Ash Ketchum already 18 was getting the taste of full maturity, something that ended his trainer journeys just about 4 years ago, after tough training in the G-men academy.

    Back to the present, Ash Ketchum like the rest of his colleagues were checking their equipment, Pok?balls, and guns studded with anesthesia. Pikachu like before was Ash?s best buddies and fighters in the fight against wild, untamed Pok?mon. Soon, their vehicle reached their destination, Ash as usual was mentally prepared for what was coming for him and his colleagues and he planned to make out alive at any cost.

    This time, Ash and his colleagues were summoned to a newly established hotel in Viridian City. ?At 1800 hours the fire alarm was triggered, a horde of creatures probably Pok?mon invaded thru the window facing the hot spring. 4 security guards dead and 4 more people severely injured.? A policeman informed the leader of the mission, Xanatos, a senior Wild Force ranger. ?Weren?t you able to get the identity of the creatures?? Xanatos asked. ?The creatures were moving too fast and they disabled the cameras. I think they are camera shy!? the policeman replied. ?Alright! This is it!? the policeman opened the back door of the hotel. His expression was that of fear and helplessness.
     
    ?Sync up our locators and spread out!? Xanatos ordered the Wild Force rangers. With that, the men activated their locators giving out a fluorescent green glow. Ash and his colleagues spread out into the rooms, the walls were badly slashed by a saw-like object. Pikachu sniffed the ground for Pok?mon scents.

    ?Pik..!? Pikachu found something and tugged Ash?s pants. ?What is it?? Ash asked. Pikachu ran off. ?Wait!? Ash shouted quietly as he called out to his Pok?mon and give chase. The mammal finally stopped at the back door of a restaurant. ?Psst..!? Pikachu told his trainer not to make any noise. Ash peered thru the restaurant?s door. It was tiny but still big enough for visibility.

    There was the clanking of falling pots and pans, and very soft but audible footsteps and the vibration of wings. As Ash looked on carefully, a green creature, about 5 foot tall leaped onto the kitchen table. It had an exoskeleton, and its forelimbs were modified into hooked saw-like structures with fingers on the edge. The next set of limbs were shortened to small tiny ?claws? used for holding and dog-like hind limbs respectively. Its screaming call was a giveaway to its identity, Scyther!

    Ash watched as the mantises spoke in clicks, screams and hisses. There has to be a dozen of them in the kitchen. ?Ash to Xanatos do you copy?? Ash tried to contact Xanatos. ?What is it? Ash?? Xanatos replied. ?I have located a horde of Scythers at the restaurant kitchen at the ground floor.? ?Alright! Reinforcements will be coming down.? Xanatos continued. ?Xanatos sir, make it fast. They are almost finished with breakfast!?
     
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    I have redesigned the Pokemon based on their closest animal relatives in our world.
     
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