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Pokemon Chronicles of Time

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Conan Edogawa

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    Ok so here's my idea. If you're interested pm me, post on the thread (here https://www.pokecommunity.com/threads/167469) , or email me at [email protected]

    Pokemon Chronicles of Time
    (need help with a name for the region). Everything is peaceful and problem free. Pokemon and humans live together in harmony, neither trying to dominate the other. The ruler of (whatever the name will be) has recently passed away with no heir to the throne. One man (need a name) forces his way into power and that's where everything changes. He believes that pokemon are inferior to man and they should be servants. he attempts to conquer the pokemon but fails. He manages to escape with a few pokemon but no one knows what types or where he is. Twenty years pass.
    Everything has stayed in balance since you were born( five years after the incident). you are enjoying a regular day at the beach. You return home but as you approach the village you see it in a blaze. You check for survivors but are interrupted by a voice. It declares " This land is rightfully mine." Then an enormous shadow goes overhead and heads for the ocean. You go back to searching and find the pokemon proffesor in some pain. He gives you a pokeball ( with a starter I have not determined) and tells you "He has returned. Stop him before dying.
    So you must learn the truth of what has happened, find this person and what they plan to do, and stop it. This is Pokemon Chronicles of Time.

    Features:
    New region
    Some new pokemon
    New maps, characters,
    New Plot

    Thank you in advance for your help.
     
    Sounds like something with Dialga...I hope not. Let's go:
    Ok so here's my idea. If you're interested pm me, post on the thread (here https://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=167469) Uh, you don't have to link to a thread I'm already in :S... , or email me at [email protected]

    Pokemon Chronicles of Time
    (need help with a name for the region) Use a filler or now, then. It's a minute detail.. Everything is peaceful and problem free ...no way. You know that's impractical.. Pokemon and humans live together in harmony, neither trying to dominate the other. The ruler of (whatever the name will be) has recently passed away with no heir to the throne So we're in either the far past or a region disconnected from the developed world.. One man (need a name) forces his way into power How? It doesn't just happen... and that's where everything changes. He believes that pokemon are inferior to man and they should be servants. he attempts to conquer the pokemon but fails What 'conquering' is there to be done? Whatever someone's philosophy is on human-pkmn relations should have nothing to do with conquering anything. Since when do pkmn own land separately from humans? I just don't see that having been the case.... He manages to escape with a few pokemon but no one knows what types or where he is. Twenty years pass And he returns?.
    Everything has stayed in balance since you were born( five years Why not four? Six? How long since your birth? after the incident). you are enjoying a regular day at the beach. You return home but as you approach the village you see it in a blaze *dirty look* What's with people burning your home village? Huh? Tell a new tale.... You check for survivors but are interrupted by a voice. It declares " This land is rightfully mine." Then an enormous shadow goes overhead and heads for the ocean. You go back to searching and find the pokemon proffesor So...the pkmn world, in your mind, operates under a bunch of monarchies? Innnnnteresting... in some pain. He gives you a pokeball ( with a starter I have not determined) WHat does HE get out of that? He needs to protect himself, and, however nice he is, that takes precedence. and tells you "He has returned. Stop him before dying.
    So you must learn the truth of what has happened What's the secret here?, find this person and what they plan to do, and stop it. This is Pokemon Chronicles of Time What does the title have to do with anything? It's a bit melodramatic if you ask me....

    Thank you in advance for your help.
     
    In your comment I don't see where you are getting these ideas. Some of them I can agree with like the town in a blaze. But I never said anything about pokemon owning their own land. They can still be conquered but live on the same land. Also, people can just force there way into power with no heir. It's happened in history before. Thank you for responding but some of your response just didn't make sense to me.
     
    Meh, it's rude not to follow-up...
    In your comment I don't see where you are getting these ideas My head--if you haven't thought beyond what you posted there, then you have some work to do yet, sorry to say.... Some of them I can agree with like the town in a blaze So are you planning on an alternative, then? What does losing the town do but add psychological trauma to the protagonist? I don't think that helps amplify any point to the plot.... But I never said anything about pokemon owning their own land Then what's being conquered?. They can still be conquered but live on the same land ...it sounds little silly otherwise. :S So what if pkmn are submissed (that a word?)? It's the case no matter if you're friends with them or not. I really don't get the major premise here.... Also, people can just force there way into power with no heir Right, but how? Why? What's the story here? I'd like to know what it is if there is one, and I'd like you to write one if there isn't.. It's happened in history before Of, of course...Elizabeth I being a prime example. But the throne wasn't hostilly ceased there; they figured out the succession...now, the War of the Roses is an entirely different story. That wasn't exactly peaceful, though it also didn't have the same circumstances.... Thank you for responding but some of your response just didn't make sense to me.
     
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