Well the story isn't bad, but it isn't entirely good either.
I understand that your just starting this, so I'm sure more will come to you later on.
As for the features.
Ok..
Honestly dude, if you want your game to be successful, have 1 region.
So many games come through here int he plot and story section, and a good amount of them fail because they're sights are set way to high.
So if I were you pick out one region to work on.
I'm not trying to sound mean, but I'm telling you from experience seeings games around here.
Good luck.