pokemon egon

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    yes, it's a PG due to some occasonal strong laungage and violence, maybe some death, but overall it's just a bit of fun that I wanted to do...the cast'll be done soon, as will issue's 2-6(gotta go on holiday on monday)

    anywyas here's what i managed to night

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    ...the residents (all excluding yami and a few more) of trafford town

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    and the banner

    now for the intro and issue 1
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    Pretty good,although you shouldn't have chat things like "*sigh*". Also the text and bubbles vary in color which IMO should all be block and white...but as i said,it's good.
     
    alex: I know, but I find it easier, the text and bubbles thing is just sorta something I do though, but anyways thanks for your thoughts
     
    Thats cool but in the next issue you spelled my other name wrong XD
    Anyway you done an awesome job in making the comic.In the first part of the issue the grass thing is messed up.8/10
     
    thaniks umbreon's shadow, sorry bout the spelling

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    Nope.Doesnt Darkat and Darkrat sound alike?XD
    Anyway the comics are fun.I wonder what will happen to Klem XD
    I rate them 9/10
     
    DP: you'll be a gym leader...I just havent decided which Gym yet...

    umbreon: here's a spoiler...klem gets a HAIRCUT!!!!!

    RP: thanks dude, you'll be a gym leader aswell
     
    o..k AHD...^^;
    and the house has a role in the story...you'll have to wait and see though
     
    lol...you should see my reply...anyways I'll try and squeeze a new one in tomorrow
     
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