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Like FlameJuli said the outlines are too black and you need some shading in places. If they are your first ones then they are good for a first attempt.
These aren't pixel art pieces, and therefore I'm moving them to the main Art Gallery. Make sure you read the descriptions of the forums before you post again - if you're not sure, PM a mod about it.