Pokemon: Morfic

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    Morfic=Morphed+Fanfiction
    Okay, this fanfiction takes place in Sarto, a place where all trainers come to catch Pokemon of all regions. They also have the power to change into Pokemon.
    Chapter 1
    Seth Andrewson pulled up his backpack and called, "Mom, I'm leaving!" A young brown-haired woman and a black, wavy-haired man came to the door with him. Then a Blaziken and a Swampert hopped up to him and Blaziken said, "Blaziken, kenken," Seth smiled. "Thanks Blaziken. I'l' miss you too." Swampert added, "Swampert, swam, pert." Seth replied, "OK, I'll definetly get a Mudkip and bring a lot of Water- and Rock- and Ground-type Pokemon, okay?" Blaziken and Swampert slapped a high five to each other (Well, actually Blaziken slapped Swampert's tailfin).
    Then a man resembling Seth's Dad, but with a slight beard came out and said, "Seth, this reminds me of the day May set out. And Torchic, you really have grown. Into a strong beautiful Blaziken." Blaziken laughed, "Blaziken, blazi, blazi, Blaziken." Then the woman (May) sent out a Beautifly, which flapped around Seth's head. "Bye, guys!" Seth called, then he ran off to the road, as the sun set.
    _-_-_
    Seth opened the door. A man with white hair and a mustache asked, "Seth?" "Yeah, Professor Rowan." The Professor said, "Have you decided your Starter Pokemon yet?" Seth immediately said, "Chimchar," Prof. Rowan handed him a ball. Seth pulled out a sticker-album and stuck a green diamond sticker on the red side of the PokeBall. Then Prof. Rowan gave him five more balls. Seth decided, "Well - PokeBall....GO!" In a flash of red light, a small flaming monkey appeared. Rowan said, "Its a male I acquired very recently." Then he placed another PokeBall in the empty place.
    _-_-_
    CONTINUED NEXT CHAPTER
     
    Hm, refer to the Pokemon Fanfic Guide within the fanfiction lounge. There are a few easy things that can greatly improve this story without too much effort, even for your young age and potential language barrier.

    For example, try to insert a blank line between paragraphs so that it's easier to read. Start a new paragraph whenever there is a new dialogue from a new speaker. These little things can make it far easier to read, and yet it is not hard for anyone

    Skim through the writing guide, and you can pick up a few others easy fixes like that too~
     
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