Pokemon Pilot Comic

[mars714]

Hi, I created this account a while back (like 2007) but never got around to using it until recently. Anyhow I want to know what other pokefans think of this comic I wrote a little bit ago... It's just a pilot, meaning it won't be continued unless it gains popularity.

Anyhow, Here it is from my own website:

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