Pokemon Princesses

[Bubsy]

Heya all this is my comic

Plot:They have to find Aprils Mum and dad that went missing looking
for one treat.

Season 1 - Off the see the Princesses
Issue 1 - The journey begins https://img463.imageshack.us/img463/2331/pokemonprincesses19gw.png
Issue 2 - This way https://img66.imageshack.us/img66/4563/pokemonprincess27fp.png
Issue 3 - Theres the castle https://img232.imageshack.us/img232/7007/pokemonprincesses39qd.png
Issue 4 - We need the one treat map https://img78.imageshack.us/img78/2315/pokemonprincesses45ps.png
Issue 5 - Can we join you?https://img159.imageshack.us/img159/70/pokemonprincess58pt.png
Character Bios

(left to right)

Name: April
Age: 20
Pokemon: Baleef and Jumpluff
Description:She is trying to find the princesses to save her parents.

Name: Jack
Age: 20
Pokemon: Relicanth heracross scizor
Description: He helps april find the princesses

Name: Haylee
Age: 20
Pokemon: Pikachu
Descritpion she is the princes

Name: Kaylee
Age: 20
Pokemon: Pichu
Description: She is princess to.

Credits:
Spriters resource
Vgmaps
Coronis
More soon babys

 

[Sheepnut]

Its alright but a bit hard to understand.

 

[Mini]

i think its really funny good stuff

 

[The Dash]

I cant really understand whats going on...And the plot seems a bit to..Generic.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

0.0 Woah, everything is a bit wrong here. One: Poke'mon talking is a bit cliche. Two: What is tha plot, I have no idea whats going on. Three: The text overlaps the squares. Not good. Too early to add any more critisism.

 

[Esupio]

Eh O.o;
What the heck is going on in your comic?
Please inform me.

 

[Mega(rulez)]

Ya lost me in the second panel. I'll give you a review when I take out my glasses.

 

[Shamus]

But... Why? How?
OMG! Why does it make absolutely no sense and why are they 20 years old?
The kid looks 8!
Please make more! I like the non-making sense of them because I'm an Dumb >.>

 

[Bubsy]

yer well christaline salamance ur just mean and i bet my comics way beta than yours u meanie its my first time!

shamus ur kool! ty you for lyking it will you be my boyfriend?
PLZZZZZ

Mega wat do u mean? cuz i really want to kno.

 

[Persona]

shamus ur kool! ty you for lyking it will you be my boyfriend?
PLZZZZZ

please don't double post...its against the rules. and ya i know this is your first time but it doesn't make any sense.....try to stay on topic and what do you mean by boyfriend? O.o

 

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

You should really use your own character sprites instead of game ones...and story is a bit mixed up.

 

[Bubsy]

thank you mini i appreciate your likingness

 

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

And stop the double and triple posting, you'll get in trouble with moderators....

 

[Bubsy]

sheepnut thankyou for your honesty

im not double posting ok so think again before sayin that

 

[Persona]

STOP double-posting or i'll report you....i'm not being mean but i've told you many times and you still don't listen. you get 1 more chance.

 

[Kurosaki Ichigo]

Double Posting is posting more than once that is right after the previous post, and you did it again.

 

[Egyptian Sphinx]

Bubsy you are double posting *reports*

 

[Bubsy]

Episode 3 will be up very soon. Sorry for all the double posts im new and didnt know.

 

[Persona]

Episode 3 will be up very soon. Sorry for all the double posts im new and didnt know.

thats alright, just try not to do it again ^_^

 

[Bubsy]

I made new one guys. SZOMG! PRINCESS COMES!