Pokemon Randomness

[El Diabeetus]

Pokemon Randomness:
Comic 1
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[Matt Silver]

Cut, Print, Bad.

The map, the joke, the fact that it is random and one panel, the mix of styles. the crappy speech bubbles and the bad recolourization of Brendan.

Thats whats wrong, try to fix it maybe.

 

[[NovaPirate]]

Never, ever make a one panel comic. SUper saayan's aren't overrused but they're a common joke. Random 'funny' comics usually aren't random and funny, so use this kind of comic at your own expense. The speech bubbles look like you just used eraser, try using Elipse or find one somewhere like spriters-resource.com. And work on your recoloring, there's a recoloring guide somewhere...

 

[YUMAWARU]

well ... the grafics are not that good, and the actors act like they are
in cheap, simple teenagers drama.