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Pokemon Root Version

TimeDialga33

Go Chickorita!
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    Pokemon Purple Version

    Welcome to the region of Agilia ! One morning renin or fila's mom Said" go to prof. pine's lab". Renin or fila exit the House and walks toward prof. Pine's Lab and enters the lab. when he or she gets inside Malias comes in and walks with him or her to prof. Pine. He Says "you and malias must go and pick a pokemon" . renin or fila Walks near the table where the bin where the starter pokemon are and renin or fila and malias pick a pokemon . Then they walk back to prof. Pine . He told them " There is a Pokedex ,it is my latest model."and gives them a pokedex. he says " finish the Agilia pokedex and national pokedex software installed into You and Malias's pokedex". then they walk outside into toura Town and Battle pokemon . when battling renin or fila and or malias wins.he told you "your mom and my mom agreed on you and me going on an Adventure Through the Agilia region but suddenly boom the local day care explodes into peices because of a team grove bomb. malias touches a peice " well , who exploded our day care into peices?" malias Questioned. Renin or fila answered " it was a team grove grunt who did it. i will be telling ." the grove grunt returned and yelled " hey! no telling or touching a peice of our bomb., if you do i will tell the boss and he will crush you with his pokemon."the grunt meant the tg leader named arber. malias and Renin or fila reply" oh now you don't, we will train and get strong and beat you guys." Elite four champian keskis Walked near them " could you beat me probbly not because you dont haqve any gym badges and are weak. try beating the 1st gym leader ktone if you don't beat him and get the stone badge try and try again untill you beat him and get the stone badge . good luck on your journey to fame." he promised them and walked away. " aways concentrate." he told renin or fila and walks away. good luck.
     
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    ...sounds like every other pokemon game with names substituted. at least tell us ideas for new features.
     
    I Know it's like the game boy then ds rpg series games. i want my story and game to look like a real gba version of pokemon!
     
    what i meant was...it's unoriginal. you have nothing to distinguish it AT ALL. You could replace the names with those from any pokemon game. know why? because there's no plot. each pokemon game has its own plot, even if it is just a repetitive formula. You still have different bad guys, different goals, etc. what you did was give us the intro to every pokemon game and replaced a few names. it's a poitnelss project as it stands right now. give us more info.
     
    you just gave a plot outline, and not a plot, perhaps if you gave more information, in a "novel" like way, instead of a "you do this, then you do this, then you do this" format, it would be easier to understand what you are talking about >.>
     
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