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Pokemon Worlds End

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    About Me...
    I've been around awhile, but i've never actually posted an idea(I've tried..). People say i have good ideas for books and such, so i'm trying to get a game idea goin on.. I have little experience, but that's just a small defect.. kinda.. well, enough about me! let's look at the idea..

    It Has Been Said...
    Pokemon and humans live together peacefully for as long as we can remember. Pokemon used to be friendlier than they are now! playing with the children, helping the people with chores, helping older people cross the street. Everything was in peace.. Legendary Pokemon weren't always hard to find. There used to be as many roaming around as normal pokemon. Then, some greedy people decided that some parts of the pokemon are valuable. In example, the beaks feathers of the legendary birds, the fangs and fur of the legendary dogs, and, an extreme mistake, the golden arcs of arceus. This was a mistake, because the foolish humans took the wrong arcs to take. One arceus, all the others considered the king. And this arceus, had a mate, with diamonds embedded within its arcs. So, one day, when arceus was getting food for his beloved queen, the poachers go to their nest and take her arcs. Leaving her crippled. When arceus returned, he was blind with anger when he saw the equipment used to kill her. He was lost in his anger so much, that he decided to wage war against the foolish humans, calling all of the pokemon to fight against them. But not all pokemon wanted to fight the humans whom they've grown up with, and they fought against the pokemon army. After a year of battle, arceus summons a meteor to destroy the planet, so he wouldn't have to live with his sorrow, and kill the evil beings who killed his only love. Before impact, the strongest pokemon on the humans side came to stop the impact. The crash made a enormous crater, except for where the pokemon was standing. It left a pillar-like mountain. Luckily, the meteor hit a deserted area, so no humans or pokemon were harmed. but arceus knew that the pokemon would try to protect the world, so he summoned a meteor that held a pokemon inside it. Deoxys was brought to the planet. It started to cause chaos, along with all the other pokemon in this army. The battle lasted another year, when the scientists found out how to store the legendary pokemon for all eternity, or so they though. 200 years later, a group of evil people discovered supposed locations of these pokemon, and are now searching for them. Arceus has not forgotten what the humans did.. He dreams of his plan for revenge...

    How It Starts...
    You and your two best friends are sitting on Professor Collins apple tree. He called you all there to meet a good friend of his who want to ask you something. You all stare out into the distance, looking at the pasture of normal-type pokemon. You start to hear whining in the distance, of some pokemon, like rapidash and ponyta. along with barking. You all look at each other, wondering why a fire type would travel so far past the border. So your rival goes out to check it. you and your other friend follow. You enter a forest, to find men in black cloaks riding towards the lab! You all run back to Collins to tell him, but as you reach your town, the men ride past you, and they break down the fence for the wild pokemon. A man with an orange shirt with a squirtle runs beside you and asks for you name. When all of you tell him, he smiles and says, "Are you ready for your adventure to begin?


    Features
    New Region
    No More Gyms! More like "Initiators", in a way.
    Type Areas
    Missions(some go with the story)
    Multiple Rivals
    Pokemon follow(if possible..)
    New pokemon(if i can find a good spriter...)
    And more to come!

    like i said, im inexperienced, and need LOTS of help. if your interested in this, and want to be part of it, either VM me, or post a replying this thread. Thank you!

    I'm also trying to learn how to work the RPG Maker XP, but i want to include the touchpad menu from heart gold and soul silver for this. Only if it's possible.
     
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    Hm. this is very interesting. I have some questions for you.

    Are you intentionally taking a lot of spinoff type liberties with the story? After all, there is only one Arceus, and most legendaries can't just be taken down that easily. I have to say you should be careful with that, as much as I genuinely like the darker bent of the concept.

    What will you have instead of gyms? Although all of your "features" could use a lot more detailing, this one in particular made me double-take. While it could potentially be awesome to have an alternative to the gym system, it could also be a disaster, so potential players are going to want to know what you have to offer in order to make up for this.

    Your story is exciting; now please tell us more so we don't think you have nothing planned!
     
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