PokeWars

[DININI]

This is my second comic...I will uptade it every saturday or sunday..
Enjoy it :D

Season 1 : The war starts...
Episode one:https://briefcase.pathfinder.gr/download/525662



Special thanks to:
Barboach (he gave me the sprites)

 

[The Dash]

It looks awful no offence. The font is all wrong, theres big white boxes around the text boxes and theres frame pices going outside the frame boxes...

 

[Ash_Pokemaster]

It looks awful no offence. The font is all wrong, theres big white boxes around the text boxes and theres frame pices going outside the frame boxes...

Yup it's no good but he says it's his second sprite comic. Well, fonts are worng there are transparent sprites and many other errors. But it's better than you're last one, you've improved ;) Keep it up.

PS: In no terrible way would I call you chief!!! x.x XD

 

[poke_spriter]

its horblie* it is just seens to me that it is wrong no offense!

 

[[NovaPirate]]

It looks awful no offence. The font is all wrong, theres big white boxes around the text boxes and theres frame pices going outside the frame boxes...

I agree, and the poke'mon have the background in them, plus I have no idea what's going on. The second comic excuse doesn't work, my second comic looked better than this, so, why shouldn't his, we have plenty of tutorials.

 

[Esupio]

Officer Jenny Sprites, not yours or Barboach's. I saw them on Pixeltendo earlier this morning, Made by Silverbolt I do believe.

and the whole thing is terrible