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Porygon2 :~: He's your robot!

You're gonna hate me...

I honestly still think it looks too simple a blank. That said, knowing you started it fron scratch, it's a good accomplishment. But the symbol in the top right is too blurry, and the fonts for weakness/resistance/retreat cost don't look right. Sorry, but that's just what I think...
 
mmmmm, why did ye have Put this Pokemon on the Basic Pokemon???
as DD sed the type symbol is oh so blurry, nice to see that u used a Fabulous Porygon 2 picturette illusrated by the one and only Cascade Gonpory
maybe try using some different style of font text, coz to me it looks still like the normal fakes we use
 
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Ok, I believe every one already said everything, but I'll say anyways.

BLANK:
  • Too simple, lack of colors and smoothness. All the forms are based on poligons...
  • The type symbol is too blury and is not centered, it looks like an eye looking up...
  • The bottom stats could also be an improvement, like improving the font and substitute retret for retreat cost or RC.
  • The blank don't need the "Put this card over your Basic Pokémon stuff"...

6/10

CARD:
  • Nice art, very cool, one of the best I've seen by Cascade without counting with the 3D looking ones!
  • Correct wording and neat placement. Even though the upper attack cost is 1-2 pixels left than the other.
  • Process is a cool attack. Jet Loop is plain... 30 damage.
  • This is a good card to use as evolution to the most recent editions of Porygon, which are a lot weaker than the Base Set one...

7,6/10

Overall: Simple effecient card... a beggining game supporter, not mend to attack, but can damage pretty well.
 
Well... the negative doodles have been pointed out. :P

I agree with the others, the type symbol is sooo blurry. also the Put Stage 1 on... text is not needed. It Somewhat destroys the great looks of the blank. I suggest you to move the Stage 1/2/basic text to the postion of the 'Put Stage 1...' text. Its font is the same as the 'put stage 1... text but a little more smaller.

Also. May I point out that the 'resistance' text should go a little more to the left to fit with the '- 30' text but if you intend NOT to put it then it's ok.

Great Idea with the Placement of the name. It looks kinda hard to put it though. :P

7/10 = Blank.
9/10 = Porygon though. :D
 
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