Preview!

[Ciro]

This is just a preview of my next comic....

Things that will change: The Psychic OW will be changed....

Credit: Avatar- Psychic OW and Park OW
Coronis- Cyndaquil OW

Note: Park is the shadow, the black is the shadow coming off him

 

[Ark Kuvis]

You need to work on Pannel placement.
Maybe you should un italic the text.
but work on that and it can become good.

 

[Dragon-Chan]

Work on panel placement a bit and you may not want to use italic, like Daviku said. Good, no text-under-panel, good grammar. Yay!

 

[Esupio]

did ya get permission from coronis

What those 2 said

 

[Roy-Kun]

*is confused* dude... i don't get the pannels, it needs order o.o

 

[Arcanine Fan 101]

I'm with Red-San on this one.