Pysncrono's Shabby Art

[Pysncrono]

Hi!
I recently tried making large pics of pokemon / fakemon. I made the following thing in GIMP:

I know its horrible.
Can you guys please tell me how to improve this stuff? I dont have a tablet and therefore for almost everything I use the path tool.
Please CC and help!
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[Gelidice]

no, cool!! i like it. dous it have a name?

 

[Almia-Ranger]

I take it its a pre-evo or evo of Luvdisc? I actually think it looks really good. If you could just smooth out the colouring in places... such as the eye, it will be done =D