Rate my Heartgold team please :)

[skyluigi2]

Hi! I was wondering if my team at the minute was any good:

Snorlax: Lv.81 with the moves Rockclimb, Flamethrower, Thunderbolt, Surf
Chimecho: Lv.100 with the moves Last Resort, Energy Ball, Shadow Ball, Extrasensory
Magnezone: Lv.48 with the moves Magnet Bomb, Flash Cannon, Thunder, Discharge
Dusknoir: Lv.54 with the moves Charge Beam, Dark Pulse, Shadow Punch, Shadow Sneak
Poliwhirl: Lv. 44 with the moves Bubblebeam, Mudshot, Blizzard, Body Slam
Snorunt: Lv. 46 with the moves Ice Fang, Icy Wind, Blizzard, Crunch

Currently: Training Magnezone, Dusknoir, Poliwhirl, Snorunt

 

[Eeveé]

Hi! I was wondering if my team at the minute was any good:

Snorlax: Lv.81 with the moves Rockclimb, Flamethrower, Thunderbolt, Surf
Chimecho: Lv.100 with the moves Last Resort, Energy Ball, Shadow Ball, Extrasensory
Magnezone: Lv.48 with the moves Magnet Bomb, Flash Cannon, Thunder, Discharge
Dusknoir: Lv.54 with the moves Charge Beam, Dark Pulse, Shadow Punch, Shadow Sneak
Poliwhirl: Lv. 44 with the moves Bubblebeam, Mudshot, Blizzard, Body Slam
Snorunt: Lv. 46 with the moves Ice Fang, Icy Wind, Blizzard, Crunch

Currently: Training Magnezone, Dusknoir, Poliwhirl, Snorunt

judging by your levels id guess you've either beten or about to fight red

replace magnezone's thunder with thunderbolt
dusknoirs shadow sneak with psychic or shadow ball
poliwhirl you should evolve and teach it submition or brick break in the plac of body slam and depending if you are fighting red or not get rid of blizzard as its accuracy is bad and replace it with ice beam and evolve snowrunt to either glalie or frosglass depending on gender and teach it headbut instead of icywind

 

[Pika-power]

Hi! I was wondering if my team at the minute was any good:

Snorlax: Lv.81 with the moves Rockclimb, Flamethrower,Giga impact, Any poison move
Chimecho: Lv.100 with the moves Last Resort, Energy Ball, Shadow Ball, Psychic
Magnezone: Lv.48 with the moves Magnet Bomb, Flash Cannon, thunderbolt, Discharge
Dusknoir: Lv.54 with the moves Charge Beam, Dark Pulse, Shadow Punch, Shadow Sneak
Poliwhirl: Lv. 44 with the moves Surf, Mudshot, Ice Beam, Body Slam
Snorunt: Lv. 46 with the moves Ice Fang, Earthquake, Any other 2 moves

Currently: Training Magnezone, Dusknoir, Poliwhirl, Snorunt

My changes are in the quote.

 

[Zlayr]

well first of all you have done something i ALWAYS avoid at all costs
you have more than 2 pokemon whit the same weaknes
Snorlax magnezone and snorunt are all weak to fighting types
i would change that

 

[MasterTobias]

judging by your levels id guess you've either beten or about to fight red

replace magnezone's thunder with thunderbolt
dusknoirs shadow sneak with psychic or shadow ball
poliwhirl you should evolve and teach it submition or brick break in the plac of body slam and depending if you are fighting red or not get rid of blizzard as its accuracy is bad and replace it with ice beam and evolve snowrunt to either glalie or frosglass depending on gender and teach it headbut instead of icywind

Either replace the thunder with thunderbolt, or perhaps more useful, replace somethin' else with rain dance. (Only if 'zone can withstand a hit or two)
Shadow Sneak is a beastly move, I don't know what you're talking about :P
Same with blizzard, it has perfect accuracy in hail so...
The snorunt is male, so Glalie is a good choice... try to teach it Ice Shard, or some moderate power move.