Rate my team?

[Legion_oG]

Well.. Im new to this forum its the only one that i didnt join just to download something well anyway
here are my pokemon
Crobat
Toxic
Cross poison
Empty ( ingame its fly )
Acrobatics
Arcanine ( life orb )
Flamethrower
Wild charge
Double team
ExtrmeSpeed
Metagross ( muscle band )
Zen Headbut
hammer arm
Meteor mash
Earthquake

Kindgra( chestoberry rest combo )
Dracometeor
Rest
Surf
Dragon Dance ( idk what moveset to put this in. .. Im NOT breeding )

Slaking
Acrobatics
Flail ( i NEED A SUBSTITUTE ) i can breed for this pokemon.
Hammer arm
earthquake

Krookadile (soft sand )
Earthquake ( ik always a must have )
Swagger and Foul play combo
Outrage

THanks ...

 

[Dark Pulse94]

ok, first of all, you will need to neaten your RMT up a bit...

2nd - You need to supply EV's, Comptetetive battling is very different from battling on your DS with your friends, I know, I've been trying to breed a decent Pokemon for weeks on my Black version

3rd - my attempted review...

Crobat is a very good lead with Inner Focus, although I don't think Toxic would be the right move...

Try this set

Crobat @ Levties
Jolly Nature
EV's - 232 HP / 56 Def / 76 SpD / 144 Spe

-Taunt
-Roost
-Super Fang
-U-turn/Brave Bird

Arcanine - Double Team is BANNED - evasion moves are really annoying and have such been banned in competetive play
Arcanine has much better physical stats, so use Flare Blitz over Flamethrower

Metagross - Muscle Band??? Choice Band is a WAAAAY better Item. Other than that, it is a decent set...

Kingdra - Outrage/Waterfall instead of Draco Meteor/Surf - Dragon Dance does not Boost Special attacks, only the physical kind...

Slaking is a terrible Pokemon that, despite it's brilliant stats, should not be used unless in combination with Cofagrigus

if you do decide to add Cofagrigus to the team, you need to do a few things:

1. send Out Cofagrigus until it is hit by a physical attack
2. Switch to slaking immediately
3. use the move Pursuit...

do this, and truant will be negated, allowing you to sweep with slaking!

Slaking @ Leftovers
??? nature
??? EV's
-EQ
-Pursuit
-Return/Body Slam
-Rock Slide/Stone Edge

Krookadile - I'm not too sure about this one, but Swagger + Foul Play may take too much time setting up