rate my team :)

[Dr.Stiles]

here is my team they need work like bad lol plz help :D

first up

gallade lvl 100
stats
attack:383
defense:170
sp.attack:150
sp.defense:268
speed:250
moveset
stone edge
leaf blade
phsyco cut
close combat

rhypherior lvl 61
stats
hp:231
attack:231
defense:212
sp.attack:86
sp.defense:85
speed:50
avalanche
rock wrecker
hammmer arm
earthquake

raichu lvl 100
stats
hp:279
attack:279
defense:141
sp.attack:225
sp.defense:153
speed:273
moveset
thunder bolt
focus punch
volt tackle
substitute

blissey lvl 100
stats
hp:714
attack:44
defense:88
sp.attack:154
sp.defense:370
speed:136
moveset
seismic toss
soft boiled
stealth rock
aroma therapy


empoleon lvl 93
stats
hp:288
attack:198
defense:207
sp.attack:232
sp.defense:201
speed:183
moveset
drill peck
surf
hydro cannon
waterfall


tyranitar lvl 56
stats
hp:194
attack:185
defense:141
sp.atttack:110
sp.defense:131
speed:124
moveset
crunch
earthquake
sandstorm
dark pulse

 

[sims796]

This is my Raichu:

Raichu-Light Clay/Life Orb
Nature:Timid
Thunderbolt
Grass Knot
Nasty Plot
Light Screen

If you didn't guess, he's my sweeper/support.

Why in good name would you teach Tyranitar Sandstorm? Doesn't it automatically create Sandstorms?

 

[Lephisto]

my tyranitar has this for moves

Dragon Dance
Crunch
Rockslide
Earthquake

 

[Shiraishi]

Your Empoleon is beyond horrible. All the other pokemon(cept raichu) look like they were traded. I wouldn't expect someone who had thunder on a Tyranitar to get a Gallade with almost perfect attack and speed.

 

[Azonic]

WTF????? Tyranitar knows Sandstorm??? *faints*

Alright here are the rules for competetive:

1. Element

No more than 1 element of each type unless one is a supportive move.

e.g.

Rhyperior@Life Orb
Avalanche
Stone Edge
EQ
Megahorn

There is no more than one Rock type move on it... This can cover more pokemon than one with only one element. Don't use a moveset like:

Rhyperior@Life Orb
Rockslide
RockWrecker
Stone Edge
Rock Throw

It has no diversity...(this is pointing to that Empoleon...)

2. Hyperbeam

DO NOT use Hyperbeam or any type of Hyperbeam, it takes two turns... 2 Surf attacks are more powerful than one Hydrocannon. 95+95>150...

3. Sweeping

Use a pokemon stats to your benefit... you can't just go arount with a physical sweeping Blissey! Right? Now there is a reason Tyranitar shouldn't learn Dark Pulse. It's attack stat is the more powerful than Special Attack, so put that to good use.

4. Balance

To make a good team, you start out balancing it. You can't have 6 Special Sweepers and call that a team. The problem I have is that you have 3 physical sweepers and 2 special sweepers. A good team consists of:

1 Physical Sweeper
1 Special Sweeper
1 Physical Sponge/Wall
1 Special Sponge/Wall
1 Annoyer
1 Tank/Cleric/BPer

Your team isn't balanced. :(
uhh... yeah... thats about it... I think

And... use that Rhyperior I gave you...

 

[Shiraishi]

Good job penguin you put everything I was too lazy to write o_o
Question: Why life orb on Rhyperior? He can somewhat tank physical attacks due to his solid rock ability..I find it useful to have a mediocre tanker(My Swampert :3)

 

[Azonic]

eh... that was just a sample...

 

[Dr.Stiles]

ooooh thankyou very much and yah alot of them i traded :D im trying to ev train myself

and i know tyranitar can already create sandstorms lol but when i traded thats what it had im trying to fix that what should i replace it with?and empoleons hydro cannon what do i replace that with?