[RMXP] Pokemon Dark Legend

[ZekRes]

Pokemon Dark Legend


INTRODUCTION

This is my first game made in RMXP by my friends and me. We've changed many things. New Region, new places, many battles different battle backgrounds etc.

STORY

Your Father is a great Pokemon Trainer. He defeated all Gym Leaders and when he was going to defeat the Elite Four he found that some bad guys named Team Gun are trying to awake all the Legendary Pokemon by the Power of Gildu a powerful magician. They Kidnapped Gildu and with his power they are going to awake all Legendary Pokemon. Your father goes to stop the but it is too late they awaked all the Legendary Pokemon. Than your father runs from there to home and takes you and your mother far from there to a new place in Cyclone Region. From there your adventure begins. You are given to choose the Sonnoh Starters.

CHARACTERS

Boy Scod
Girl Sarah
Rival Lee

Screenshots will come soon...

 

[halcyonic]

This is definitely not for this forum. This should be at the Game Development section.

This forum is for newbies to introduce themselves.

 

[Nickalooose]

Okay... Well... Uhh... Err... Um... What the?! There is nothing to say about this but... What the?!

1 screenshot... Not even a good one!


Story is... Um... What?! Haha... I don't know what to say about this, but I feel I need to comment... Some bad guys?! Don't you mean a team of bad guys... Your father is a great trainer, he defeated all the gym leaders, but quit before being champion, for no reason I might add, even if he did find out this "Team Gun" were to awaken your Legendaries, why would he feel the need to grab his family and move away? Power of Gildu, is this a person? Or a new Pokémon? Not quite sure what to think about that... What is going to happen when these Legendaries awaken?! Worlds going to end, people are going to die, Pokémon will burn alive... What's the worst that could happen?! It's probably a good thing they all are woken up, some have a purpose for being around... Sonnoh, is this a typo of Sinnoh, or is this your brilliant thinking and calling a region a cheap knock off of a name, from Sinnoh?!


Introduction... New places... I should hope so too, being a new region and all! Oh okay, many battles, different backgrounds etc... Yeah, who'da thought that you'd have, many battles and different backgrounds, etc... I didn't see this coming... I was under the impression, Pokémon games only had like 3 trainers, 8 gym leaders and an elite 4 with the same boring backgrounds and battle bases as............ You know what!!! Sarcasm is getting a little boring in this post now...

This is embarassing to say the least, if this is an Idea, I do believe you need to give more of an idea... If this IS your game, you need to give more of EVERYTHING, I haven't checked lately, but I'm pretty sure 1 screenshot doesn't qualify to be here... As for the above post, what?! Haha... That is an irrelvant post that helps noone and also gives us readers no pleasure in reading... That's my rant done for the minute haha

 

[Rayquaza.]

I'm sure a moderator would usually come and say this, but Cilerba didn't post the rules thread to wast his time, you need at least 2 screenshots for the beginners showcase and many more. (I won't point them out because that's what the rules thread is for)

 

[Lord Varion]

I'm sure a moderator would usually come and say this, but Cilerba didn't post the rules thread to wast his time, you need at least 2 screenshots for the beginners showcase and many more. (I won't point them out because that's what the rules thread is for)

I'm pretty sure, that's not the case.
Many threads here in the Beginners Showcase are just Ideas, like this thread probably is. He probably didn't see the [IDEA] tag.

As for the story, very vague, I assume 'Gildu' is a legendary Fakémon ?
What region do you run too ? Who is Team Gun? (bit inapproiate for pokemon ?)
And, wouldn't them waking Gilda, and other legends be a bit more better IN gameplay ? Add a better storyline If I'm honest.

Also, the screenshot, needs alot of work, like at least official looking text rather than a MS paint scribble.