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[RMXP] Relics of Nature's Fury

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    Title: Relics of Nature's Fury
    Story Synopsis: 1,000 years ago, a great battle was fought between nine great heroes and Flynn, the embodiment of darkness. After a long battle, Flynn was defeated... or was he? In the present day world of Thraetenalp, a young man wanders the continent of Noramer. When he fights some bandits near the town of Growlston, he reports it to the mayor. This kicks off a massive journey in which the young man will find out his relation to the nine great heroes, and how Flynn was merely slumbering for the past millennium. New friends and new powers wait in Relics of Nature's Fury.
    Story Link: In Progress Story (not caught up to what's programmed, weird in the beginning)
    Demo Link: Demo 2.1
    Rating: T (if it was an actual game, this would probably be the rating)
    Features: Spells, Summons, Voice acting,
    Screenies:
    Spoiler:

    Spoiler:

    Cast of Characters: (name - element - starting class)
    Taylor - Time - Blade Knight
    A young man, 20 years old, with strange powers. He is on a pilgrimage around the world to see new things and find out where his shapeshifting powers came from. He finds himself near Growlston when he is suddenly, unexpectedly attacked...
    Clarisse - Ice - Gunner
    A young woman, 20 years old. Born and raised in Growlston, she starts working for the mayor after her parents die of natural causes. Mayor Paul treats her like a daughter at times, but she still works for him. When a young man appears telling of bandits, she wonders if her world is about to change...
    Phillip - Fire - Monk
    The young blacksmith of Growlston, 21 years old. He finds himself working on the blade of a warrior who recently came to town. He is suddenly possessed by a dark spirit, and the warrior and one of the Mayor's maids come to his rescue. He joins them on their quest...
    Jillian - Thunder - Cleric
    A 21-year-old nurse in the city of Plassville, in which men are treated as little more than game. With her assistance, Taylor and company see the Queen. Little did they know that Flynn was hot on their trail...
    Francis - Light - Weapons Master
    The scholarly mayor of Buruna, 25 years old. Knowledgeable on many subjects, his odd mode of speech causes laughter among many. When he discovers that the ancient myth of Flynn and the nine great heroes was true, he joins the party on their quest to save the world, and begins his own quest to chronicle the truth of the events...
    Nikolai - Wind - Dragoon
    A 19-year-old boy from the city of Chino. While talking to his friend Draconus, Taylor and company appear. Draconus is possessed by Flynn, and with Taylor and company's help, Draconus is saved. After learning of his heritage, Nikolai joins the party, partly to save the world and partly to learn more of his family that he never knew...
    Nathan - Earth - Ninja
    A 19-year-old boy from an ancient village. Raised with the secrets of the ninja, he has a strong code of honor, and is not merely an assassin for hire. He joins the party for reasons of his own. Maybe it's because he's been dreaming of his ancestor as of late...
    Megan - Water - Mage
    (NO INFO YET!)
    Trisha - Shadow - Mysterium
    (NO INFO YET!)
    Spoiler: If you care about the summoned monsters...

    [copyright 2008-2010 Mirby Studios]

    Demo: Demo 2
    Yes, I'm going backwards on demo count, it appears. Oh well.

    Crap. Can someone move this thread to the proper forum. I forgot to check which one I was posting in. D'oh.
     
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    The only problem I see here is that there is too much space. You've no aesthetics to your maps. There are way too many blank spaces where you should place pots or flowers.

    The villages look like a ghost town. No one is outside, and like I said before, no flowers or anything that signifies that life exists in that area.

    The houses bear little to no furniture. Sure you have a few chairs, but ask yourself this. Would you want to live in that house? And if so, what would you put in it that you, yourself, would actually live in.

    Other than that, I see nothing wrong. Just develop your map making skills. Take a look at other JRPG's and see what to add to make a village look lively. For a quick glance, I would recommend taking a look at Golden Sun, or Tales of Phantasia (any Tales game really). I hope this helps.
     
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