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Jedite1000

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    i have decided to continue on my comic after the sogen saga

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    Warining...this comic is PG 13 with frequent violence
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    these are my old chapters i have a few missing links in them but i will find em soon

    Sogen saga
    Chapter 1 - A samurai named roy Missing link
    Chapter 2 - Sogetsu revealed
    Chapter 3 - Let the training begin
    Chapter 4 - You are ready
    Chapter 5 - The truth about sojetsu
    Chapter 6 - Roy's journey begins
    Chapter 7 - Roy's hidden power
    Chapter 8 - Spirit human legacy
    Chapter 9 - Droid attacks Missing link
    Chapter 10 - Charlotte vs. Droid
    Chapter 11 - Seperation
    Chapter 12 - Roy vs. Sogetsu
    Chapter 13 - Short circuit
    Chapter 14 - Sogetsu Spirit warrior
    Chapter 15 - Roy unleashed
    Chapter 16 - Roy spirite warrior
    Chapter 17 - Avenged

    these will be my new chapters which has improved abit so i hope you enjoy it

    Deception Saga
    Chapter 18 - Enter Genjuro
     
    i tried addin speach bubbles but it was hard to do and also it takes up the pictures
     
    thanx for the comment im gonna make the next chapter now and ill put it up when im finished
     
    yeah there good i like the design of charecters though gory but good u could imporve with the speeches but its good i still like it well then ok goodbye.
     
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    It's not bad, the plot is a lil cliche', but not awful, the quaility of the sprites are good, atleast you didn;t try reclouring them, the placement is quite good, but one phrase "Speech bubbles"
     
    yeh i guess everybody likes speech bubbles it just didnt work out in ms paint with speech bubble, if i had another program then i will add speech bubbles next time, anyone one know of some?
     
    If you don't know how to make speach bubbles in MSPaint, then don't bother trying another program.

    Heck, don't bother making comics altogether.
     
    yeh i guess everybody likes speech bubbles it just didnt work out in ms paint with speech bubble, if i had another program then i will add speech bubbles next time, anyone one know of some?

    Give me a day or two, I'll make you a speech bubble tutorial. If not, heck, I'll do your speech bubbles for you.
     
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