Roxasabridged
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Some background information:
This fanfic was originally supposed to be the sequel to Pokemon: Ruination. However, that story was rather poorly planned out, and I lost interest in it. I eventually decided to try writing this out, while leaving out any important plot threads tying this to the original story. I dunno if I'll ever bother finishing/rewriting the first story, but here's a summary of what I had planned after chapter 16...
Current Chapter
Chapter 1 - The Unknown Prodigy
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"Ladies and Gentlemen! We have finally reached the finals of the Indigo Tournament!" An excited announcer screamed into his microphone from his position in the middle of an arena. The field was located outside, big enough to hold fifty thousand people in the stands.
The announcer, a small, middle aged man with short blonde hair, continued. "As you all know, the finalists are last years Champion, Red of Pallet town!"
From one side of the arena, emerging from the waiting room, a young boy of eleven walked to his position on the field. Red, true to his name, wore a red jacket, with white stripes along the middle of the jacket and collar, as well as short, black sleeves. His cap was a similar shade of light red, with a white outline of a pokeball on the front.
"And the other finalist, a young woman who surprised us all with unbelievable skill! From the Sevii Islands, we have Blue!"
On the opposite side of the stadium, a girl wearing a blue shirt, a red skirt, and a white sun hat with a red pokeball outline similar to Red's cap. Clipped to the collar of her shirt was a device that looked similar to a VS. Seeker. Her long, brown hair swayed in the gentle breeze as she walked to her position on the field.
"As you all know, Red, at the young age of ten, managed to defeat the Elite Four and the previous Champion Green!" The announcer informed the cheering crowd. "So we know that his skill his great. Blue, on the other hand..."
The announcer paused for a second, glancing at the young girl. It seemed to him that Blue wasn't too excited about this match. Her face looked grim.
Must be nerves... Red's her opponent after all... The announcer decided.
"Blue, from the Sevii Islands south of Kanto, isn't too well known, but if her amazing battle prowess throughout this tournament is any indication, Red's not going to find her an easy win!"
The crowd roared in agreement and anticipation. One individual in the front row, centre seat, sporting brown, spiky hair and a black, short sleeved shirt and purple trousers, looked decidedly bored.
Sitting next to him, and cheering the two trainers on, was a broad-built old man with greying hair, and a white lab coat. The young boys grandfather and renowned professor of Pallet Town - Samuel Oak.
"Come on, Green, don't act like you don't want to be here!" Oak encouraged his grandson.
Green sighed with irritation. He didn't enter the tournament because of his Gym Leader examination, which ran concurrently with the preliminaries. That was a week ago, and he was now gym leader of Viridian, but it peeved him to no end that the stupid test couldn't be taken until next year if he skipped it.
Red, the youngest Champion in Kanto, smiled at his opponent. He was looking forward to an epic battle with this girl, who displayed amazing skills in battle. Blue, however, didn't look to excited about being here. As with the announcer, Red wondered if someone was wrong.
"The rules of this battle..." The announcer began, and Red snapped back to attention. "... Six versus six! No substitutes! Once one Pokemon is defeated, the trainers send out their next Pokemon until all Pokemon have battled or a trainer reaches four victories!
Red and Blue placed their hands over a Pokeball on their belts, staring each other down. Both had intensity in their eyes. Unlike the young girl however, Red's eyes also showed excitement.
"Round one... begin!" The announcer began the match, and sprinted away from the centre. As soon the announcer had spoken, the two trainers had picked a Pokemon and thrown the pokeball towards the centre.
From Red's side, an Espeon had emerged from the Pokeball in a flash of red light.
Blue's Pokeball had revealed a Ditto. The purple, feline like Espeon watched the darker purple blob of a Pokemon carefully.
"Match one! Ditto Versus Espeon!" The announcer shouted from the sidelines. Above the young trainers, a giant electronic billboard showed the current statistics. No wins or losses for either battler. Ditto and Espeon currently on the field.
As expected, the Ditto immediately transformed, becoming a copy of Espeon, albeit with a darker shade of purple fur.
I know Espeon's strengths and weaknesses, I still have an advantage... Red thought to himself. He was capable of making quick decisions, and his mind was flashing through many strategies to combat a fellow Espeon. While he did this, the gem in Espeon's forehead glowed for a moment. It had pre-emptively used Future Sight. That would take the Ditto off guard later.
"Ditto, Bite!" Blue commanded her Pokemon. The Espeon shaped Ditto then charged at the real thing, ready to bite it.
"Protect!" Red ordered quickly, and Espeon glowed a bright white light. The Ditto copy attempted to bite down on Espeon's neck, but it couldn't penetrate the shield.
"Psychic." Espeon's gem glowed brightly once again, and the Ditto was lifted away from Espeon, suspended by Espeon's Psychic powers.
Blue's eyes flashed with worry for a second, but she seemed to think of something quickly.
"Ditto, Toxic!" Blue ordered. The Espeon shaped Ditto aimed its eyesight at Red's Pokemon, and its gem glowed as well. A purple substance seemed to shoot out from the gem, coating Red's Espeon in the sludge. Unable to concentrate on the Ditto, the Psychic attack was stopped and Ditto fell, landing on its feet.
Red saw that his Pokemon had been poisoned, but there was an upside. He saw that Blue's Ditto had been poisoned too, thanks to Espeon's ability to pass on the status ailments inflicted upon it.
Blue had known this would happen, but she had a plan to defeat Red's first Pokemon, even if it had to be a tie. The fewer losses, the better. Losing wasn't an option for her.
"Wish and Fake Tears!" Blue ordered. Nodding painfully, Ditto's gem once again glowed, and a star seemed to fall from the sky, but no one could tell from the bright daylight.
Before Ditto could use 'Fake Tears' however, the real Espeon's Future Sight attack finally struck, delivering a mental blast and fainting Ditto, who reverted top its blob form.
"It looks like Red scored a powerful critical hit!" The announcer pointed out as the crowd roared in excitement. "Blue loses her first Pokemon fairly quickly, but there's plenty of time for a comeback!"
Blue was surprised that her Pokemon had fallen so quickly. But then again, her opponent was Red... Although the loss troubled her, at least Ditto had set up Blue's next Pokemon nicely.
"Thank you, Ditto." Blue recalled her tired Pokemon and smiled at the Pokeball.
Red recalled his own Pokemon, praising his Espeon for the hard work. Red glanced at Blue again as he chose his next Pokemon. She certainly cared for her Pokemon, if her smile was anything to go by, but Red wondered why exactly she seemed so down...
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"Well, how's she doing?" A man dressed in a black uniform asked his colleague as he approached the viewing monitor. A young woman with short blonde hair who, Like her colleague, also wore a uniform. Both had a large red 'R' emblazoned on their fronts.
The female snorted in irritation. "She lost the first round. Pretty fast too."
The two dark-clad criminals were watching from a camera installed in the VS Seeker. Their view was almost exactly the same as the girls. The female Team Rocket member had watched as the Ditto had fallen.
"She uses such pathetic Pokemon against that damn boy and expects to win?!" She growled.
The male Rocket watched with a calmer expression. He didn't seem to troubled. "Well, we know that she's probably the best trainer we have available to combat Red. This is only to determine how well she'll fare against him in a real battle.
Risa, the female grunt, wasn't convinced. "Yeah, and if this was a real battle, she'd be losing badly just now..."
The male, known as Ryan, simply smiled slightly. Unlike his colleague here, Ryan knew that Blue wouldn't have lost her Pokemon so quickly without some way to utilise it to her advantage...
This fanfic was originally supposed to be the sequel to Pokemon: Ruination. However, that story was rather poorly planned out, and I lost interest in it. I eventually decided to try writing this out, while leaving out any important plot threads tying this to the original story. I dunno if I'll ever bother finishing/rewriting the first story, but here's a summary of what I had planned after chapter 16...
Spoiler:
With the Pokemon surrounded, things looked rather bleak for the heroes, until Blaine and the few 'surviving' trainers emerged from their hiding place (The volcano), drawn by the sounds of battle.
With the help of reinforcements, the glitches were pushed back, allowing more offence to be directed to Missingno.
After a massive combination of destructive techniques, damage is finally visibly inflicted. Mew takes the chance to try and rearrange Missingno's DNA to what it used to be.
However, the Porygon that formed Missingno is too badly corrupted to save. Forced to find a way to stop it from rampaging again, Mew was forced to Teleport the glitchy Pokemon into space, cutting off its air supply and instantly killing it.
The glitchy Pokemon and trainers that remained where reverted to normal, and the previously defeated Pokemon reappeared normal. Mewtwo recognises Red's strength, and offers a battle within Cerulean Cave at a later date. Mew disappears, saddened at what was done to save Kanto.
In space, Missingno had dissolved into a virus, which would later have been the same virus altered by lasers shot from Hoenn that would form Deoxys.
With the help of reinforcements, the glitches were pushed back, allowing more offence to be directed to Missingno.
After a massive combination of destructive techniques, damage is finally visibly inflicted. Mew takes the chance to try and rearrange Missingno's DNA to what it used to be.
However, the Porygon that formed Missingno is too badly corrupted to save. Forced to find a way to stop it from rampaging again, Mew was forced to Teleport the glitchy Pokemon into space, cutting off its air supply and instantly killing it.
The glitchy Pokemon and trainers that remained where reverted to normal, and the previously defeated Pokemon reappeared normal. Mewtwo recognises Red's strength, and offers a battle within Cerulean Cave at a later date. Mew disappears, saddened at what was done to save Kanto.
In space, Missingno had dissolved into a virus, which would later have been the same virus altered by lasers shot from Hoenn that would form Deoxys.
Current Chapter
Chapter 1 - The Unknown Prodigy
Characters
Spoiler:
Main Characters:
Name: Red
Age: 11
Rank: Indigo League Champion
Pokemon: Espeon, Poliwrath, Pikachu, ?, ?, ?
Comments: ..............
Name: Blue
Age: 11
Rank: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon: Ditto, Ursaring, Marowak, ?, ?, ?
Comments: Red's female counter part. Could also be his twin. But will I go for such an obvious twist?
Name: Green:
Age: 11
Rank: Gym Leader
Pokemon: ?, ?, ?, ?, ?, ?
Comments: The five minute Champion, now gym leader.
Team Rocket Members:
Name: Risa
Age: ??
Rank: Rocket Grunt
Pokemon: Standard Issue Grunt Pokemon
Comments: What could Team Rocket's plan be? And what role does Risa play in the larger scheme of things?
Name: Ryan
Age: 25
Rank: Rocket Grunt
Pokemon: Standard Issue Grunt Pokemon
Comments: Seems a bit more knowledgeable than Risa, but is that really important?
Name: Red
Age: 11
Rank: Indigo League Champion
Pokemon: Espeon, Poliwrath, Pikachu, ?, ?, ?
Comments: ..............
Name: Blue
Age: 11
Rank: Pokemon Trainer
Pokemon: Ditto, Ursaring, Marowak, ?, ?, ?
Comments: Red's female counter part. Could also be his twin. But will I go for such an obvious twist?
Name: Green:
Age: 11
Rank: Gym Leader
Pokemon: ?, ?, ?, ?, ?, ?
Comments: The five minute Champion, now gym leader.
Team Rocket Members:
Name: Risa
Age: ??
Rank: Rocket Grunt
Pokemon: Standard Issue Grunt Pokemon
Comments: What could Team Rocket's plan be? And what role does Risa play in the larger scheme of things?
Name: Ryan
Age: 25
Rank: Rocket Grunt
Pokemon: Standard Issue Grunt Pokemon
Comments: Seems a bit more knowledgeable than Risa, but is that really important?
Chapter 1 - The Unknown Prodigy
"Ladies and Gentlemen! We have finally reached the finals of the Indigo Tournament!" An excited announcer screamed into his microphone from his position in the middle of an arena. The field was located outside, big enough to hold fifty thousand people in the stands.
The announcer, a small, middle aged man with short blonde hair, continued. "As you all know, the finalists are last years Champion, Red of Pallet town!"
From one side of the arena, emerging from the waiting room, a young boy of eleven walked to his position on the field. Red, true to his name, wore a red jacket, with white stripes along the middle of the jacket and collar, as well as short, black sleeves. His cap was a similar shade of light red, with a white outline of a pokeball on the front.
"And the other finalist, a young woman who surprised us all with unbelievable skill! From the Sevii Islands, we have Blue!"
On the opposite side of the stadium, a girl wearing a blue shirt, a red skirt, and a white sun hat with a red pokeball outline similar to Red's cap. Clipped to the collar of her shirt was a device that looked similar to a VS. Seeker. Her long, brown hair swayed in the gentle breeze as she walked to her position on the field.
"As you all know, Red, at the young age of ten, managed to defeat the Elite Four and the previous Champion Green!" The announcer informed the cheering crowd. "So we know that his skill his great. Blue, on the other hand..."
The announcer paused for a second, glancing at the young girl. It seemed to him that Blue wasn't too excited about this match. Her face looked grim.
Must be nerves... Red's her opponent after all... The announcer decided.
"Blue, from the Sevii Islands south of Kanto, isn't too well known, but if her amazing battle prowess throughout this tournament is any indication, Red's not going to find her an easy win!"
The crowd roared in agreement and anticipation. One individual in the front row, centre seat, sporting brown, spiky hair and a black, short sleeved shirt and purple trousers, looked decidedly bored.
Sitting next to him, and cheering the two trainers on, was a broad-built old man with greying hair, and a white lab coat. The young boys grandfather and renowned professor of Pallet Town - Samuel Oak.
"Come on, Green, don't act like you don't want to be here!" Oak encouraged his grandson.
Green sighed with irritation. He didn't enter the tournament because of his Gym Leader examination, which ran concurrently with the preliminaries. That was a week ago, and he was now gym leader of Viridian, but it peeved him to no end that the stupid test couldn't be taken until next year if he skipped it.
Red, the youngest Champion in Kanto, smiled at his opponent. He was looking forward to an epic battle with this girl, who displayed amazing skills in battle. Blue, however, didn't look to excited about being here. As with the announcer, Red wondered if someone was wrong.
"The rules of this battle..." The announcer began, and Red snapped back to attention. "... Six versus six! No substitutes! Once one Pokemon is defeated, the trainers send out their next Pokemon until all Pokemon have battled or a trainer reaches four victories!
Red and Blue placed their hands over a Pokeball on their belts, staring each other down. Both had intensity in their eyes. Unlike the young girl however, Red's eyes also showed excitement.
"Round one... begin!" The announcer began the match, and sprinted away from the centre. As soon the announcer had spoken, the two trainers had picked a Pokemon and thrown the pokeball towards the centre.
From Red's side, an Espeon had emerged from the Pokeball in a flash of red light.
Blue's Pokeball had revealed a Ditto. The purple, feline like Espeon watched the darker purple blob of a Pokemon carefully.
"Match one! Ditto Versus Espeon!" The announcer shouted from the sidelines. Above the young trainers, a giant electronic billboard showed the current statistics. No wins or losses for either battler. Ditto and Espeon currently on the field.
As expected, the Ditto immediately transformed, becoming a copy of Espeon, albeit with a darker shade of purple fur.
I know Espeon's strengths and weaknesses, I still have an advantage... Red thought to himself. He was capable of making quick decisions, and his mind was flashing through many strategies to combat a fellow Espeon. While he did this, the gem in Espeon's forehead glowed for a moment. It had pre-emptively used Future Sight. That would take the Ditto off guard later.
"Ditto, Bite!" Blue commanded her Pokemon. The Espeon shaped Ditto then charged at the real thing, ready to bite it.
"Protect!" Red ordered quickly, and Espeon glowed a bright white light. The Ditto copy attempted to bite down on Espeon's neck, but it couldn't penetrate the shield.
"Psychic." Espeon's gem glowed brightly once again, and the Ditto was lifted away from Espeon, suspended by Espeon's Psychic powers.
Blue's eyes flashed with worry for a second, but she seemed to think of something quickly.
"Ditto, Toxic!" Blue ordered. The Espeon shaped Ditto aimed its eyesight at Red's Pokemon, and its gem glowed as well. A purple substance seemed to shoot out from the gem, coating Red's Espeon in the sludge. Unable to concentrate on the Ditto, the Psychic attack was stopped and Ditto fell, landing on its feet.
Red saw that his Pokemon had been poisoned, but there was an upside. He saw that Blue's Ditto had been poisoned too, thanks to Espeon's ability to pass on the status ailments inflicted upon it.
Blue had known this would happen, but she had a plan to defeat Red's first Pokemon, even if it had to be a tie. The fewer losses, the better. Losing wasn't an option for her.
"Wish and Fake Tears!" Blue ordered. Nodding painfully, Ditto's gem once again glowed, and a star seemed to fall from the sky, but no one could tell from the bright daylight.
Before Ditto could use 'Fake Tears' however, the real Espeon's Future Sight attack finally struck, delivering a mental blast and fainting Ditto, who reverted top its blob form.
"It looks like Red scored a powerful critical hit!" The announcer pointed out as the crowd roared in excitement. "Blue loses her first Pokemon fairly quickly, but there's plenty of time for a comeback!"
Blue was surprised that her Pokemon had fallen so quickly. But then again, her opponent was Red... Although the loss troubled her, at least Ditto had set up Blue's next Pokemon nicely.
"Thank you, Ditto." Blue recalled her tired Pokemon and smiled at the Pokeball.
Red recalled his own Pokemon, praising his Espeon for the hard work. Red glanced at Blue again as he chose his next Pokemon. She certainly cared for her Pokemon, if her smile was anything to go by, but Red wondered why exactly she seemed so down...
-------------------------------------------
"Well, how's she doing?" A man dressed in a black uniform asked his colleague as he approached the viewing monitor. A young woman with short blonde hair who, Like her colleague, also wore a uniform. Both had a large red 'R' emblazoned on their fronts.
The female snorted in irritation. "She lost the first round. Pretty fast too."
The two dark-clad criminals were watching from a camera installed in the VS Seeker. Their view was almost exactly the same as the girls. The female Team Rocket member had watched as the Ditto had fallen.
"She uses such pathetic Pokemon against that damn boy and expects to win?!" She growled.
The male Rocket watched with a calmer expression. He didn't seem to troubled. "Well, we know that she's probably the best trainer we have available to combat Red. This is only to determine how well she'll fare against him in a real battle.
Risa, the female grunt, wasn't convinced. "Yeah, and if this was a real battle, she'd be losing badly just now..."
The male, known as Ryan, simply smiled slightly. Unlike his colleague here, Ryan knew that Blue wouldn't have lost her Pokemon so quickly without some way to utilise it to her advantage...
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