Soft

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    • Seen Jan 14, 2008
    Soft-
    Are words spoken between lovers
    In tender sighs and whispers,

    Soft-
    Is comfort one finds in embrace
    As two dance in serene grace

    Soft-
    Are caresses across fingertips
    Kisses on her cheek or her lips
     
    mmmm? is that a free verse? i havent seen a poem like that one...till now...

    it's short and it could use a little more detail...but its nice though...it kinda gave some rhyming words too...hehe...
     
    "Brevity is the soul of wit" Polonius from Shakespeare's Hamlet would say.

    Although it's short, it's sweet and sums up a single brief moment, a mellow slow dance in a picturesque moment. I guess you should write a bit more because I'm getting used to your poems now...
     
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