Some pretty recent stuff.

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    Most of these are from the past 2 months, and therefore I'm still interested enough in them to go back and fix them, so any crit would be greatly appreciated.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Some pretty recent stuff.

    A Blue version Ivysaur revamp, I quite like it.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Some pretty recent stuff.

    A muscleman for a friend's game. It's a quick mix i threw together but it's grown on me a lot.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Some pretty recent stuff.

    A heavy WiP for the sadly doomed December contest. I would REALLY love crit on this one.

    [PokeCommunity.com] Some pretty recent stuff.


    MGS4 PMC troopers in D/P overworld style. I'm pretty fond of these, and feel I really made a good comeback to the style with them, however I can't place my finger on what the problems are even though I know they are there.

    Thanks again for any comments, I'll repost them as soon as I make any noteworthy changes.
     
    Nice sprites! I really like the revamp, but the flower might be in the wrong angle.
    This one is very cool too. I don't like the mountains though, the purple anti-aliasing you used is too bright and the shading isn't right. Mountains aren't smooth like that... they're irregular and rough.
    Like this; Click
     
    Your sprites have nice shading and are sprited well. 9.4/10 for them all. not a 10 or anything lol, mainly because: That revamp has dark outline to me, all THICK from the lighter outline colors.
     
    Only rit i can say is that ivysaurs bulb is to... like, narrow?
    Idk, make it more round and not as long.
     
    Yup i was thinking the same thing.
    Its bulb just isn't fat enough.
    Other than thats is good.
     
    it is a flower bulb it looks fine, compare it to a real flower bulb
     
    Thanks for the comments guys, with Ivysaur I completely agree that the bud is iffy, i'll probably follow Zorin's suggestion and change the angle completely.

    I know what you mean about the mountains too, they look too cartoony/soft. I'm gonna use a more subdued purple and change the shading to be more raised areas and sharp points.
     
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