Sonic comic

[Esupio]

random title XD
erm well I'm off school and I'm gunna make this comic last hopefullly
ok heres the first part

https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v647/Blaze_Boy/sonicscene23.png
credit to dan sidney for the sonic and tails sprites and to rexx for the map room back ground and to zach zinn furr for an upcoming sprite

Heres the second part

https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v647/Blaze_Boy/mycomic.png

heres the third part

4th wall smashed totally

4th wall smashed for the 4th comic XD

 

[Raizor Blaid]

there pretty good, but the box things were the words go in (I ferget what they're called...) could be better, and maybe you could work up to an acctually storyline (if you aren't already) I rate them 7.5/10

 

[Esupio]

w00t someone posted anyway its speech bubbles and I'm working towards a plot

 

[Allstories]

This doesn't make any sense. At all. Seriously. There's no clear attempt at any cohesive humor, and it's not particularly pretty looking.

 

[armadilloHD]

Making your characters insult you isn't very good self esteem...

 

[Esupio]

Ok a new comic
Its not funny or anything unless your derangged but its there soon