A cool comic undone by crappy speech bubbles and bad grammer. I don't mind a little bad spelling on a message board, but in a comic it's good to use good grammer, so that people can understand it. And make sure to fill your speech bubbles with white, and make the speech bubble outline thinner. But, it seems original, and the plot is okay. I haven't seen the Sonic stretch thing before, which I think is very creative.