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Start of an RPG story I'm working on

Ooka

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    So, um, I just decided to write a regular RPG, no Pokemon involved. This is just the start, written in about 5 minutes, just wondering if I'm off to a good start I suppose. :/

    You'll begin the adventure in an event that shows your town burning down. It'll show your father beside you dead, with them in the process of killing your mother. You see them ransacking your house, and then dragging your sister out of the house. Your mother hollers her daughters name just as they kill her. You watch in horror as they murder the rest of your villiage while you hide behind the bushes with absolutely nothing you can do. They take your sister with them as a prize of sorts, and leave everyone else to die. However, you and a friend that was with you live due to the fact that you were in the woods playing when it happened, and hid in the bushes when you found what was happening. You and your friend leave the town and just start walking, not really knowing what you'll find, when eventually the both of you pass out. The screen enters again with a few strangers giving you and your friend water. Once you get your fill, you dose off again as they take you away to lord knows where. As you awake, you begin to take in your surroundings (Much like the LoZ: OoT intro, however with much more bewilderment). You then gain control of your character and explore the house as well as talk to villagers. Trying to exit through any exists will bring up a message that you need to discover who brought you here and why first. Eventually you'll find a house in the upper part of town that has the village chief inside and he explains that some of his men found you and your friend passed out in the desert and decided to bring you back. You explain your story and how you ended up there and the chief give you his sympathy. He explains that your friend awoke a few hours before and is in the bar outside of the village getting something to eat. You now have the ability to leave the town. Once you progress to the bar you find your friend eating and you participate while you talk about what happened. You both decide that if the chief will permit it, youll stay in the town and learn to fight to attempt to bring your sister back. You proceed back to the chief's quarters and discuss staying there. He permits it and it cuts scenes to 5 years later.

    It's got some edits in it that aren't really involved with the story, but that's because when I start actually making it, I'll have those to tell me how I should make it look.
     
    I like the storyline but, I don't like how at the end it skips to five years later.
    You should just make a scene where they teach you to battle and send you on your way.
    Start working on it.

    This would be a great game for 3d cut scenes.
    If you want to know how to do 3d cut scenes, just pm me.
     
    Alright, I'll fix that when I start writing again.

    Also expect a story update before the end of the day. ;)
     
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