Suger and Spice Pixel Art

[Suger]

I was a little bored and created a few pictures. They aren't really pokemon (mostly), but I might use them later in a game of some sort. Maybe.

I would apreciate constructive criticism, please give a reason for why you like it.

Humans

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None, yet.... sorry ^^

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Creatures

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Flurril
Fire Squirrel

normal shiny




Miirii
Little Seal

female male
normal shiny, normal shiny

The wings of Miiri are so delicate and soft that it will only allow
the most trusted of friends to touch them.


Shinrai
Trusting

female male
normal shiny, normal shiny

Shinrai are so full of trust that they bond quickly with friends.
It erases spite within people's hearts.


Gekido
Wrathful

female male
normal shiny, normal shiny


Arcania

female
more to come...

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[curiousnathan]

They are okay I have to admit,
But maybe they can be somesort of fire/fightingtype pokemon?
Well great work, and good effort ;)

 

[Suger]

Cool idea. Maybe an evolution of flurril.
I haven't really thought of most of the evolution chains of most of the pokemon I create. I often just come to it later and go, "Hey, that works!"

But.. Now I come to see the images of flurril and arcania together, I can probably make them into one evolution chain. But for now I think I'll make them seperate.

 

[-Smash]

You got a good smooth lineart on Arcania, yet not on Flurril.


Also, the sprites look too flat. You should add some contrast to the colors inside to make them recognizable, and give the piece some depth.

Right now, you got the whole bunch of light colors inside clashing with the dark outlines. This needs to be balanced.

 

[Eevee-Freak]

The 1st one is awsome, but there is something with the second one,the legs are too large for the body, just like the tail

 

[Suger]

Thanks for the crit... I'm updating the first post with some more sprites and stuff now.

About the colours; I often get them a bit messed up, though I think the colours on Arcania (normal) are better than what i usually have... Though that's just me ^^

About shading; I have never really been very good at shading, though recently improved alot. Though that dosn't meen I'm as good as I would like ^^;

About lineart; My lineart has improved alot more than either of the above. If you want proof I'll put up an old picture or two to compare with. Plus my anatomy skills, both human and animal, have improved too, I used to get proportions massively wrong (heads, hands, arms, you name it, I got it wrong ><).

^ Based on info from the past 2 years ^

 

[bat003]

Oh i like the Miirii but the Shinrai has something that makes it look like it has two bodes but I like the shading on it other than that I likey!