Superstar Saga Comic

[Toadsworth]

someone Delete This Thread!!

 

[Tbone2356]

"Needs Fine Tuning"

Hmmmmmm...Heres What I Think Of It....

Intro 1 Is Too Small For Anyone To Read...In Intro 2 It Is Really Random How Mario Comes Out Of The Sauna And Magically Has A Double And How Luigi Is Outside And Randomly Gets A Double Aswell...You Need To Classify Both Marios And Both Luigis Sepreatley Or Its Confusing...Let Toad Give The Copys A Pin Or Something On Their Shirts...Episode 1 Does Not Have Any Speech Bubbles And Is Saved In The Worst Quality Ever And Some Text Rolls Off The Screen...YoU Cant Tell If The Copys Or The Originals Are Loading A Plane And For What Purpose Are They Loading The Bowsers Plane....And Why Are They Taking Orders From Him And Acting Like Slaves....What Does Loading Bowsers Ship Have To Do With Helping The Princess....Episode 1's 1st Panel Is A Really Confusing And Bad Opening....
Episode 1 Should Be Episode 2 And Intro 2 Should Be Episode 1....

Put Your Episodes In Link Form Not Plastered Out On The Page It Looks Sloppy...There Are No Character Descriptions And No Information On This Storys Plot....

My Overall Rating (1-10, 10 Being The Best) Is: 3

Fix It And Make It Better...

 

[Toadsworth]

Now It's better, don't you think?

 

[Prince Peasley]

Hmmmmmm...Heres What I Think Of It....

Intro 1 Is Too Small For Anyone To Read...In Intro 2 It Is Really Random How Mario Comes Out Of The Sauna And Magically Has A Double And How Luigi Is Outside And Randomly Gets A Double Aswell...You Need To Classify Both Marios And Both Luigis Sepreatley Or Its Confusing...Let Toad Give The Copys A Pin Or Something On Their Shirts...Episode 1 Does Not Have Any Speech Bubbles And Is Saved In The Worst Quality Ever And Some Text Rolls Off The Screen...YoU Cant Tell If The Copys Or The Originals Are Loading A Plane And For What Purpose Are They Loading The Bowsers Plane....And Why Are They Taking Orders From Him And Acting Like Slaves....What Does Loading Bowsers Ship Have To Do With Helping The Princess....Episode 1's 1st Panel Is A Really Confusing And Bad Opening....
Episode 1 Should Be Episode 2 And Intro 2 Should Be Episode 1....

Put Your Episodes In Link Form Not Plastered Out On The Page It Looks Sloppy...There Are No Character Descriptions And No Information On This Storys Plot....

My Overall Rating (1-10, 10 Being The Best) Is: 3

Fix It And Make It Better...

I agree mostly on that Tbone xD

(sorry BDG)

But, I made the intro, so i'm to blame for that....
Its the point that they randomly got doubled by the creator O.O

 

[cyber2]

someone Delete This Thread!!

Try PMing a mod, or someone who has the power to delete a thread.

 

[Sylphiel]

Threads like this aren't deleted, even upon request.

However, I can lock it. Next time, please PM a staff member about something like this; merely editing a post won't be of much help since it's extremely easy to overlook it.

*closed*