Sython429's sprite thread

[Sython429]

hello. i am sort of new here but not new at all to spriting. i hae made some and will share them with you. i dont take requests. here are my sprites.

Ahh my newest pride and joy. my first scratch ever.

Firey mewtwo

My wierd devamped groudon.

An eevee sprite i made. not custom.

Chao flareon.

Lairios

Lapvipbat

Mew ball
And now some banners.

Thats not all of my sprites. i have them on 3 different computers so this is only one. i will post when i have my others. until then cya!

 

[Sylphiel]

Just FYI, but banners don't belong in this forum...they belong either in the main Art Gallery, or in Graphics and Photography (I think the second one, though).

The sprites are pretty good...no glaring errors on the mixes or anything. The devamp looks cool, though the head is a bit confusing to look at and make sense out of. As for the scratch...nice attempt at one, though don't shade each color separately like that. It just gives the sprite a cut-and-paste effect that isn't the greatest look ever for a sprite.

All in all, though, pretty good job you've done with those. ^^

 

[gothsinn23]

I agree with Cowrie. Overall your sprites are good.

Great shading on the scratch sprite, but the overall anatomy could use a bit of work. If you want help on the legs, you can PM me about it. I'm good at those.

The 'Firey Mewtwo' was greatly done. I cannot pinpoint anything that could be worked on.

I agree with Cowrie about the head of the Groudon. It looks a bit small for its body, and beneath it there looks like there is no neck. But then again, that was how older sprites looked.

The eevee sprite is great. The mirror-reflection look makes it look genuine.

Again, great shading on the chao. The anatomy is perfect. Though, on the right side, there looks like there is an unecessary piece of tail there. Flareon's tail isn't usually that big. Fluffy, but not puffy.

I sense a bit of outlining issues in this next one. When recouloring in very light colors, be careful of the pokemon(s)' claws. The outlines will most likely disappear, if you use the same Eraser-tool method as I do. When that happens, make sure to add a new outline so the original outlines of the claws don't look fractured. (I sense a bit on the upper-right wing also) Everything else, including the head, is done nicely. (Although, the shading is a bit confusing near the chest.)

Again with the outline, near the lower-right part of Lapras's chest. Also, putting the tail in that spot with limited visibility can confuse some. Try to make all parts of the sprite as visible as possible so everyone can see its greatness.

This one is great, there's just a slight mishap with the placing of the tail. IMO, the tail would match-up a bit better if it were placed with the same-colored half of the pokeball. But then again, this is just my opinion.

Sorry about that..I guess I'm in a picky mood today. xP

 

[Crystal Walrus]

man really i wish you were taking requests coz i think their great the eevee looks cool how did u make it?

 

[Sython429]

Just FYI, but banners don't belong in this forum...they belong either in the main Art Gallery, or in Graphics and Photography (I think the second one, though).

The sprites are pretty good...no glaring errors on the mixes or anything. The devamp looks cool, though the head is a bit confusing to look at and make sense out of. As for the scratch...nice attempt at one, though don't shade each color separately like that. It just gives the sprite a cut-and-paste effect that isn't the greatest look ever for a sprite.

All in all, though, pretty good job you've done with those. ^^

Im sorry. i thought it was for everything overall. thanks for the comments though^_^

I agree with Cowrie. Overall your sprites are good.

Great shading on the scratch sprite, but the overall anatomy could use a bit of work. If you want help on the legs, you can PM me about it. I'm good at those.

The 'Firey Mewtwo' was greatly done. I cannot pinpoint anything that could be worked on.

I agree with Cowrie about the head of the Groudon. It looks a bit small for its body, and beneath it there looks like there is no neck. But then again, that was how older sprites looked.

The eevee sprite is great. The mirror-reflection look makes it look genuine.

Again, great shading on the chao. The anatomy is perfect. Though, on the right side, there looks like there is an unecessary piece of tail there. Flareon's tail isn't usually that big. Fluffy, but not puffy.

I sense a bit of outlining issues in this next one. When recouloring in very light colors, be careful of the pokemon(s)' claws. The outlines will most likely disappear, if you use the same Eraser-tool method as I do. When that happens, make sure to add a new outline so the original outlines of the claws don't look fractured. (I sense a bit on the upper-right wing also) Everything else, including the head, is done nicely. (Although, the shading is a bit confusing near the chest.)

Again with the outline, near the lower-right part of Lapras's chest. Also, putting the tail in that spot with limited visibility can confuse some. Try to make all parts of the sprite as visible as possible so everyone can see its greatness.

This one is great, there's just a slight mishap with the placing of the tail. IMO, the tail would match-up a bit better if it were placed with the same-colored half of the pokeball. But then again, this is just my opinion.

Sorry about that..I guess I'm in a picky mood today. xP

You werent being picky. those comments actually will help. i will PM you about the legs. it is supposed to look like its about to pounce.

man really i wish you were taking requests coz i think their great the eevee looks cool how did u make it?

I will tell you through PM.