Tales of a Team Aqua Suicune- My fan manga

[Kitori_theTeamAquaSuicune]

Hello, this is a fan manga I did and I am still working on it, it is called "Tales of a Team Aqua Suicune". This is only the prolouge manga, so the real manga plot is only unfolding at the moment. As you can see the first 24 pages are crap, but its alot better after that.

SMALL SUMMARY:
It's about this Team Aqua Admin named Kitori Sotoma, who is the daughter of Wes and Rui (mistakenly in the manga its "Seth and Yui") who were killed by the Cipher admin, Venus, and her Suicune. and to prevent spoilers, this is all I can say.
ENJOY!!!

Chapter uno: Nightmares from a Memory
P1. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23152131/
P2. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23186561/
P3. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23189550/
P4. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23190128/
P5. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23190440/
P6. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23190628/
P7. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23190804/
P8. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27349692/
P9. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23191118/
P10. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23191545/
P11. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23191633/
P12. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23191771/
P13. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23192010/
P14. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23192135/
P15. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23192263/
P16. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23192367/
P17. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23219168/
P18. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23219504/
P19. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23219596/
P19.5. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27349780/
P20. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23219731/
P21. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23219882/
P22. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220003/
P23. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220113/
P24. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220240/
^OMG! LAST CRAPPY PAGE!!
P25. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220385/
P26. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220492/
P27. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220629/
P28. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220751/
P29. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/27349910/
P30.https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220840/

Chapter deux: Origin of Revenge
P31. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23220974/
P32. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23221214/
P33. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23221375/
P34. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23221610/
P35. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23221737/
P36. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23222005/
P37. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23254584/
P38. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23254824/
P39. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23298686/
P40. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23298773/
P41. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23631762/
P42. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23701242/
P43. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23701409/
P44. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23701612/
P45. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23701975/
P46. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23702071/
P47. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23853559/
P48. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23854281/
P49. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23886803/
P50. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23888121/
P51. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23957246/
P52. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/23994460/
P53. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24104375/
P54. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24104526/
P55. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24216022/
P56. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24216247/

Chapter Three: The Battle Continues....
P57. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24216600/
P58. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24216733/
P59. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24216960/
P60. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24276535/
P61. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24457394/
P62. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24457675/
P63. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24496580/
P64. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24762647/
P65. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24762776/
P66. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24868838/
P67. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/24868951/
P68. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25549381/
P69. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25549848/
P70. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25573802/
P71. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25579219/
P72. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25785586/
P73. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25785835/
P74. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25786266/
P75. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25786730/
P76. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25865965/
P77. https://www.deviantart.com/deviation/25899775/

 

[Talentha]

Umm, hey, I can't seem to be able to view pages 38, 53, 59, 65, 70, and 71. All I can see is the top inch or so of the page and that's it. Is there anything you can do about that? I really enjoy your story, it's well written and Pokemon Colosseum was a great game to start this off of. I hope to be able to read those pages someday. If you can't get the computer to show the pages correctly, then maybe you could scan those pages and email them to me?

 

[Anastasia.R]

Umm, hey, I can't seem to be able to view pages 38, 53, 59, 65, 70, and 71. All I can see is the top inch or so of the page and that's it. Is there anything you can do about that? I really enjoy your story, it's well written and Pokemon Colosseum was a great game to start this off of. I hope to be able to read those pages someday. If you can't get the computer to show the pages correctly, then maybe you could scan those pages and email them to me?

I'm sorry, but you need to see the date of the post. Not reply since over a year, than, you better not post in it. If the thread is over 30 days old, and it's not your gallery or thread, you're not suppose to post in it. Now, I'm going to have to lock this.

~LeafBlade Lock​