Enokoro
is so zetta slow.
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The adventures of the chao
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You cant ask people not to go rough on you because it's your first comic. Look at Siginomis first comic, it rocked! As did Rock Lee's.
Anyway It is far to random. Try introducing a plot into it, Add backgrounds aswell it looks to plain.
Anyway It is far to random. Try introducing a plot into it, Add backgrounds aswell it looks to plain.
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its ok for a first timer i like the idea of sonic chao(s)
Yeah...OK, my First Comic (Manga in SC Form) Sucked, but with Good Practice you can have Great Comics like Matt Silver's, Decepticon's and many others. Its not a bad start, but you need to Check Over Puntuation, also Don't try to cram everything in a short speech Bubble, just make the Bubble bigger. apart from that, its an OK Start.
By the way, the 3rd Panel is a bit Random, and i can't make much sense of it!
By the way, the 3rd Panel is a bit Random, and i can't make much sense of it!