The Ancient World of Pokemon

[Dizzy]

Since my Other Story sorta back fired, I made a better one, using Nations of the World and Crap, Different Cultures and what-not, and using Myths from real life into the Pokemon Mythology.

It Takes place in Kanto First, then Spreads to all the other parts of the world. Here's a Guide to see what Cultures the world (or Kanto) has.

It could be done by Regions, or it could be done by Individual City States (mainly the Large Cities)

Saffron City - Indian Culture
Celadon City - Far Eastern (Chinese and Japanese) Cultures
Viridian City and Pallet Town - Eygptian Culture
Lavendar Town, Fuschia City, Vermillion City - Roman and Greek Culture
Cinnibar Island - Ancient American Cultures
Cerulean City and Pewter City - Germanic Tribes

and For Johto its a whole Different Story, It's Modeled like the Modern European Nations

New Barktown, Cherrygrove City - Germany
Violet City and Azalea Town - Italy
Goldenrod City - France
Ecruteak City and Surrounding Areas (not Cities just the Landmarks) - Spain
Olivine City and Cianwood City - Portugal
Mahogany Town and the Lake of Rage areas - Greece
Blackthorn City to Indigo Plateau - Britain

I'm going to post the story, and a guide with my next post so that no one gets confused...

 

[Timbjerr]

did you just say that this is gonna be a story?

I know you've been around PC long enough to know what goes in what forum. Please try to remember next time.

 

[Dizzy]

But Buddy, the thing is it's not going to be a Fanfic! Plus I asked everyone where to put it and they said if its not a fanfic put it in Pokemon General.

 

[oni flygon]

When announcing a story, please be sure to do it in the Fanfiction Lounge... It's better that way... ^_^

 

[Steeleon]

But don't the normal countries and continents exist in the pokemon world? Cause liek on one pokemon card for Xatu is says like something about in South America. Or am I just not understanding what you said correctly?

 

[Dizzy]

Here's a Part of Chapter One for your reading Pleasure :)

Chapter I ? Romance Descent

?Sir! The Army of Palatine is coming to attack us!? The Page Yelled through the hollow halls of the Palazzo Della Vermelho

?Well If they want to play Fire with Fire, then lets get them. Set up my Junctions!? The Man Shouted out to the boy.

?Which Elemental Phase would you rather use, Sire, Fire or Ice?? The Page Ran towards the Fountain, Picking up two Spheres of Red and Blue.

?The Ice One, you never know when there?s going to be a fire! Come now, lets get downstairs! Send for my Steed? The King Shouted through the empty halls.

?Yes My Liege! Hurry Sire, they approach!? The Boy Screamed running out of the Room.

The King Picks up his Ice Elemental Pokeball (or Ice-Junction) and Attaches it to Necklace**

**If you?ve ever played any of the Final Fantasy Series, Summons were used. This is the system being used in this time period. Pokemon are used as Summons.

The King Runs out to the Front gate, not knowing that above him, three Enemy Soldiers jumped onto the ground behind him.

?So you boys want to battle? Hah, Feel my Blade? The King said, Drawing his Sword.

?You Foolish Knave? One Soldier said to the King

?We?re not here to kill you, just to take your Junction!? The Second One Said

?You have a Choice, Give it to us, or we?ll use ours to kill you? The Third Said, while they all drew out their junctions.

?Hah, I guess that leaves me no choice, Die you cowards!? The King Said, Taking out a Blue Orb, and Throwing it!

?I Summon the Guardian of Ice!? The King Chanted

In that Moment, a huge Blue Force drew from the Sphere, the Skies went still, and pure snow came to the grounds?from the Snow Leapt a Giant Bird, and Spinning around, it created a Blizzard.

?Ahhhhhh The Power of Ice!? One of the Soldiers Cried being struck with the Ice

?It?s so cold, I think I?m already dead!? Cried the Second Soldier

?Well you Idiots should have equipped Ice-Shield? The Third, Unharmed Soldier said, Taking out a Red Sphere

?I summon the Spirit of the Roaring Flares!? The Soldier Cried

?NOOOO It can?t be? Cried the King

From the Bright Red Sphere leapt a Creature made of Flames, it danced around the Walls until they caught on fire. It Jumped toward the King, missing him just a tad. It then Jumped off into the Night, Scorching the whole City of Vermelho.

?Ohh No, How could I let it Escape!!!? The Soldier said

?I guess your at fault!? The King said, drawing his Sword

? Blizzard Blade!? The King Screamed Slicing the Soldier with a Pokemon-Shaped Sword

?Noooooo? The Soldier Cried running, then suddenly falling to the ground.

Now the Whole City is Up in Flames, Children Crying in the Street for their lost, dead Parents, As the King Walks through the Palace taking his belongings, he hears his son Screaming, He finds his son, hands him to his mother, and makes his escape to the Rural Town of Livandros.

 

[Dizzy]

If you didnt guess, The King, was infact a Roman Prince. Here's his Profile:

The King:

Name: Octavio Della Vermelho
Age: 18 (He's married, but he only has one kid, and the child is adopted)
Elemental Status: Ice
Weapon and Pokemon - Swords, Articuno.

 

[Dizzy]

I'm going to revive all my stories, but before I do, why don't people ever reply to my stories, do you find them boring? Or do you just not like me enough to post in them. I don't know about you, but i'd post in anyone's threads, just because I'm like them, maybe I'm different.

 

[Frostweaver]

Like what I do to all fanfics I read, critics before encouragement (lol i'm evil)

-DO NOT WRITE IN SCRIPT FORMAT!
Unless it's intended to be a professional drama script (incredibly difficult to write, as it's style is naturally difficult to fill in details, especially for ones involved with action)... this has so little descriptions that it's almost script >>;

-if you're making an allusion to something, don't point it out in the middle of the story... never do that. Let the allusion stay there... what can possibly be worst when a reader is reading a good story and is suddenly interrupted by some story unrelated junk? If you do want to comment on it, do it at the end of a chapter as author's notes

-details details details... you see if I block out the word "king" in your story and substitute in Octavio instead, no one will even suspect that Octavio is a king... this means lack of details. Details are your best friend as a writer ^^

-grammar check... how come Whole City got capitalized? It's as if his palace's name is called Whole City ;p

-the first part of the chapter Octavio is called "the man" and later "the king"... may possibly be confusing for readers


Now the good stuff:

-definitely a very face paced story, not just going on and on and on and not going anywhere for 10000 words

-a LOT of allusions... besides the obvious FF8 junction allusion, there's also YGO reference (especially the tone). Allusions always spice up a fanfic with readers wondering what's from what, and good uses of allusions will even indirectly add up character description as well

 

[Dizzy]

I shouldn't stick to writing then lol. Or I should just come up with a more Simplified Version, would that make more sense, Oh Great Frostweaver >=)