The Great War (PG-13 for some scenes)

[Drak Hamayashi]

Like Pyra's fanfic, mine is also a mix of Pokemon/Diablo. I'm heavily into those games. ^^;

Anyway, here's the first chapter of the fic!!!

NOTE: This is actually going to be rated R, but I'll edit it so it isn't that way. ^^;

Chapter 1: The New Egg, and a Spy!?​

Another day in the world of Pokemon has started. Birds began chirping cheerfully, and the Pokemon woke up from their temporary slumber, ready to go about on their business. The children could be seen chasing each other around in their parents' territories playfully, and everything seemed to be a normal, typical day.

But nothing was as it seemed, as another war was about to break out in the now peaceful world...

In a big, quiet forest meadow where the grass was forever green and swaying peacefully to the breeze, two giant birds known as Lugia could be seen enjoying some quality time of their own sleeping together, with their necks wrapped around each other. One was very muscular and its main feather color seemed to be orange; the other was somewhat muscular and its main feather color was pink. The pink also seemed to be a little bloated for reasons unknown to the untrained eye.

The orange one, apparently the male of the two, opened his eyes slowly and squinted due to the bright sun beaming in his face. He unwrapped his neck from the other Lugia and slowly got up into a sitting position. He shook the other one, which is now obviously female, gently with his wings to wake her up.

"Wake up, dear Mira... It's the day that we have the new hatchling coming."

Mira, the pink Lugia, opened her eyes and looked up at Ramos, the orange one. She smiled warmly, still a little sleepy. As she got up, she moaned softly in pain, then she whined.

"Honey..." she said quietly, "I think the egg's coming already."

Indeed, her stomach area seemed to be slimming downwards.

Ramos smiled, seeing that the egg was going to come out. "We must hurry and wake up our Cha..." He heard footsteps, and he saw that their other young children, Dulignio and Liculette, already woke their Chansey nurse up, though rather rudely. She looked rather stern for a moment, and once she saw what was happening, she nodded, knowing what Ramos was gonna say.

"So the egg's coming out..."

She rushed toward Mira's side, who was already moaning louder by the minute.

"Lay down and try to relax... Breathe deeply..."

Reculantly, she obeyed, and laid down with her belly face up. She winced as she and Ramos held wings together.

Ramos smiled even wider. "Come on... I know you can do it. Concentrate on other things."

She looked at him with a rather playful, sarcastic look. She laughed weakly. "You know it's impossible for me to do that when an egg's coming out. You should be ashamed of yourself just for saying that!"

Ramos grinned. "I'm never ashamed of myself. Not ever since we defeated those demons way back in the past."

Mira smiled again, then her face turned into a twisted form of pain. She moaned very loudly, and started breathing very heavily.

"Ahhh... it's...coming ou... AHHHH!!!"

The egg slowly slipped its way out between Mira's legs. It landed wikth a soft "plop" on the ground on front of her. Mira's face then turned into that of relaxation, and the Chansey picked up the slimy egg and examined it carefully.

"By the patterns of this egg, I can tell that it's going to be a male..." She looked up and saw Ramos looking down at Mira, who had her eyes closed and was limp. "Oh no... she must have been knocked unconscious from the egg coming out quicker than usual."

Ramos looked over at the Chansey with a worried expression on his face. "Is she going to be fine?"

"Yes," the Chansey replied, "she will be fine. She'll be out for a couple hours, but she'll come to her senses soon enough."

Ramos sighed with relief. "That's good news..." He suddenly had an idea on what to call the hatchling inside the egg. "I think I'll call the newborn 'Visimar'. I hope that's okay with Mira."

The Chansey beamed. "That's a lovely name. I'm sure she'll agree..."

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Nearby in the shadows behind a large tree, a small, blue-skinned demon grinned. It had a plan in mind, but it would take more than it alone for it to succeed.

"Ah, yes... We shall steal that egg and turn the hatchling against them." Cackling, he runs off to tell his master.

 

[Mew13]

Interesting. I like the way you described the birthing process, it was very realistic.

You paragraph well, so I don't have to give that speech!!

I really don't have a whole lot to say, except you should maybe describe your settings a little better. Your dialogues were good and I know what all the Pokemon look like, so it's just the settings. Good Luck in continuing!!

 

[Drak Hamayashi]

Thanks for the advice, Mew13. I'll edit my post right now to add more detail, then I'll copy/paste that into my story archive. ^^;