The Imperfect Wish (PG-16, and meant for pure fun)

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    Has anyone, your parents, teacher, or maybe even a friend, ever told you to be more specific? Details are key in a lot of situations, but more so in this story of magic, mystery, and wonder.

    What starts out as just an ordinary day, turns into a nightmare, as you and your group of friends fall into an ancient underground chamber buried beneath the city park. There, you run into an entity of sorts, that grants each of you one wish. You each make your wish, and everything goes black. The next thing you know, you find yourself in your bed. However, the saying "Be careful what you wish for" pops into your mind when you find that since you weren't specific enough, your wish isn't exactly what you wanted, and now you have to live with it!

    Now, what will you do? Will you try and find a way to fix things, or will you continue life normally, well, as normal as can be at least...

    Now, I know I don't have a great in-depth plot, but this RP is meant for kicking back and having a good time if you get my frift, but RPing rules still apply, and I do still reserve the right to kick anyone not up to my expectations.


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    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Appearance:
    Personality: (optional)
    History: (A brief history and description of your characters life. Ex) Family, friends, ect)
    RPing Sample:

    Now, so that it isn't given away, PM me your idea for a wish, and what will go wrong, so I can approve it without spoiling it for the others ^^;;
     
    Name: Robin
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: https://img.photobucket.com/albums/v215/AIVAS/_A.jpg
    Personality: To be brief, kind, but with a taste for mischief, and pranks of any kind.
    History: Raised in your typical family, slightly spoiled, but not much. She's been raised as an only child, but with a few friends, including a younger girl, named Madison, dubbed "Maddie" for short.
    RPing Sample: Am I required to complete this field? You know that I can RP well enough...
     
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    Name: David
    Age: 14 & 10 months (XD)
    Gender: Male
    Appearance: 5'11" with short red hair and sky blue eyes. He dresses in a grey sweatshirt, a hood attatched, and a pair of wrinkled navy blue jeans, a black pair of shoes to go along with the ensemble.
    Personality:
    History: David lives a pretty crappy life in his eyes. Besides his friends, most people push him around and bully him, and his dad had passed away last year, leaving him alone with his mom who didn't even care for him in the least.
     
    Name: Saphira Demonte
    Age: 13
    Gender: Female
    Appearance: Saphira is slender and tall, with well tanned skin. She has golden blond hair that reaches the middle of her back, and dark blue eyes that always seem to be hiding something. She wears a lot of blue, such as a light blue spaghetii strap shirt and baggy jeans.
    Personality: Saphira normally keeps to herself, and doesn't like crowds. If she befriends someone, she is very loyal. The person will find she also acts very insane. Saphira loves and trusts animals more than humans.
    History: Saphira was tossed around from family to family as a child, and is now with her fourth and hopefully last home.
    RPing Sample:

    "What are you talking about, Spencer?" Saphira shouted, standing in her doorway. She had just woken up, and hated being disturbed in the morning process of catching up with the rest of the world. Spencer was disturbing her. She didn't like it.

    Spencer tried to hide his smile but was doing a bad job about it. "I... uh... borrowed your manga, and my dog... er... ate it..." He cracked up, laughing at the look of anger, disbeliefe, and annoyance plastered on his older sister's face.

    "You're dog what?!" She was really mad now. "I'm going to strangle that thing!!!" She dashed past Spencer, into the hall, calling Shadow in a somewhat calm voice. The dog not being that smart walked up to her, wagging its tail. "There you are!"

    "Wait, don't hurt her!" Spencer came flying from nowhere, tripping Saphira and telling Shadow to run. Saphira struggled against Spencer's death grip, trying to get to the scottish terrier. It just sat there watching the two humans in amusement, oblivious that one of them was trying to kill her.

    A scene from this morning.... >_>'
     
    Name: Paige

    Age: 15

    Gender: Female

    Appearance: Tanned complexion, with dark brown hair that is just above her shoulders, she has angled bangs that fall in her face, gray/green eyes, and is about 5'3. She usually wears a pale green hoody, with a faded denim mini skirt and running shoes.

    Personality: Rather ditzy, and unnaturally easy going, it takes a lot to get her to show any emotion, happy or sad.

    History: Her parents died in a car crash when she was 5, and since then, she?s had a phobia of death and anything associated with pain. She lives with her aunt, in a small apartment.

    RPing Sample: Don?t make me, pudding XD
     
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    OOC: I believe we have enough members to start.

    IC: Lousy day... definately a lousy day. Well, at least yesterday was. I had only just woken up on this bright Saturday morning. No really, it was blinding!

    "Reanne!!!" I cried as I jumped up out of my bed, landing with a thud on the floor. It took me a minute to regain my focus, and notice my 18 year old sister with a flashlight standing above me.

    "Serves you right." Reanne stated coldly, as she tapped the flashlight in her right hand over and over again. "Anyways, your friends called, they want you to meet them in the park."

    "Whatever..." I replied as I finally stood back up again, and went into the bathroom to get dressed. As I undressed, I noticed a large black bruise on my right leg. I must have gotten it when I refused to hand over my lunch yesterday. That's right, they hit me after...

    After exiting the house in my casual clothing, I headed towards the park, where hopefully I could have a good day.
     
    I was sitting on a bench near the entrance to the park, playing a game on my Nintendo DS. A lot of people had made fun of me for it, but I ignored them. Mostly, I was too involved in my games to notice. Either way, it achieved the same results. Today though, I was a bit more alert, looking around. Suposedly, some of my friends had decided to meet me in the park. This wouldn't be the first time I missed something like this because I was playing a game...
     
    I sat quietly on the park bench next to Robin, kicking a rock near my foot away, and flipping through a magazine I had brought to keep me occupied. I had already called David on my cell, we had planed to hang around the local park today,

    ?It?s too hot today, we should have gone somewhere else.?
    I murmured, without looking up from the paper book in my lap, my voice was as monotone as always, even while I complained.
     
    "No.... I don't wanna wake up... Go away..." I muttered, rolling around. Spencer was attempting to wake me up, and I didn't want to. Of course, I never wanted to.

    Spencer grinned. "Alrighty," He said, "But brace yourself." He left my room. All was quiet again. Sweet silence... I could sleep some more.... But, it was too quiet. Way too quiet. I opened one eye. I wish I hadn't.

    Three scotties came charging at me, Bonnie landing on my back, Shadow on my legs, and Robin pouncing on my head. They walked all over me as if saying 'You need to get up! Get up!!' I tried to ignore them, but it didn't work that well.

    "Alright!!" I yelled at them, sitting up. They sat on the end of my bed, side by side, their tounges hanging out and their tails wagging. Looking like innocent angels. That would be the first mistake anyone would make if they looked at them. But, I still loved them. They were like siblings to me. Shadow started staring at Tessa, the overweight Golden Retriever, and Mozart, the mix-bred cat with too much fur.

    "Oh crap!!" I jumped out of bed, got dressed, and headed outside on my bike, with Mozart, who loved to go for bike rides. I was supposed to meet some friends at the park. Hopefully, none of them were allergic to cats.
     
    "Hey, guys!" I called out as I saw Robin and Paige sitting on a bench on the distance. I ran to them, and stood in front of them, glancing down at Robin's game, before flicking her lightly on the head. "Can you stop playing for one, geez. And hi Paige." I finished, glancing over at Paige. "We only waiting for Saphira now then?"
     
    ?Yes, she should be here soon though.?
    I answered, flipping another page.

    ?So? what were just going to wonder around here all day? I haven?t been to the park since I was a little kid.?
    I said unenthusiastically, finally looked up and glanced towards a pathway where a few children were plating on a swing set.
     
    Saphira raced toward them, Mozart comftorably perched on her head. "Sorry I'm late," She panted, jumping off the bike, "Why'd we have to pick somewhere so far from my house anyways?" The park was almost a mile away from Saphira's house, and that wasn't so bad. It was trying to get there in five minutes that was. "So, whats going on?"
     
    "There she..." I was cut off as I felt the ground begin to shake. Was the combined weight of all four of us in one area too much or something? Me thoughts were confirmed as the ground below us gave way, and we fall into a deep pit of darkness. I think I was knocked out somewhere throughout the fall.

    When I woke up, the first thing I noticed was a glow from torchlight, and my friends around me. I coughed slightly, and placed my right hand on my left shoulder. Great, I was bleeding. "Where... are we?"
     
    I had pocketted my DS just in time, and it looked like it had survived the fall. Relived, I looked up in time to hear David's words, and looked around, and my jaw dropped. "I seccond that questio." I mumbled, suprised. What the heck was this place? And what the heck was it doing underneath a park?!
     
    As soon as Saphira's feet hit the ground it crumbled beneath her. She fell though, with Mozart digging his claws into her head. She could feel blood. Saphira managed to pull him off, and now held him. More blood. This was great. Something hit her on the head and she lost conciousness.

    "Oh, ****..." Saphira muttered, finally coming around. "Where are we?" The were under the park it looked. The light from the hole was barely a speck above them. It was amazing she had survived the fall. Mozart sat in her arms, trembling.
     
    I felt the ground crumble beneath my feet as Saphira ran towards us, my body as well as the others were sent hurling down into what felt like a bottomless pit. I went numb as I hit the ground, and it took me a moment before I could move again.

    ?How? did we survive that??
    I asked no one in particular as I managed to sit up, shaking with fear. I should up using the jagged wall next to me for support, and gazed up at where we had fallen. It would be too steep to climb up. I looked around at everyone, they all seemed to be roughed up a bit, but nothing terminal.
     
    "I have no idea, and at this point, I really don't want to..." Saphira said, still in shock. They had actually fell that far. What if someone else fell? Would they survive, too? Questions bounced around in Saphira's head. Someone would discover the giant hole and help them... They had to...

    Mozart meowed loudly, and leapt out of Saphira's arms. He ran toward one of the walls, and suddently was engulfed in the darkness. It took Saphira's brain a moment to realize he went into a tunnel. "Wait, Mozart!!" She yelled, getting up and starting to run after him.
     
    "Saphira! Don't- Ow!" I had begun to chase after her, but had tripped over something, and had landed flat on my face. I turned around, and noticed a stone tablet on the ground, some weird glyphs glowing. Then, I hear a weird voice in my head.

    What is your one wish... it asked me.

    Naturally, I replied, even if I didn't know what was happening. I wish to be free from all the bullying and crap in my life! Then, total darkness.
     
    I heard a strange voice ring out in my mind. "What is your wish?" I thought I was just losing it, so I replied anyway "I want to be able to have more control over my life." then everything went black, I didn't even have time to think of fainting.
     
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