The Kanto Region Reloaded

Dark-Umbreon

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    The Kanto Region is back! Better than ever too!

    Characters:
    Hero's

    Name: Alisha https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Alisha-Mini.jpg
    Age: 14

    Name: Riku https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Riku.jpg
    Age: 14

    Name: Silver https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Silver.jpg
    Age: 14

    Villans
    (none yet!)
    Name:
    Age:

    Name:
    Age:

    (Redone!!!)
    The Beginning:
    Prolouge- Intro: https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Prolouge-Intro.png [New!]
    Episode 1-The New Trainer: https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode1-TheNewestTrainer.png
    Episode 2- Meeting Silver: https://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j199/RiverdaleRegion/Episode2-MeetingSilver.pngNEW

    Credits:
    Dark_Umbreon (Me!)
    Silver 92
    Desgrades of Serebii Fourms
    https://www.vgmaps.com/Atlas/GBA/index.htm#PokemonE
     
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    I like it a bit, I mean the sprites look pretty good and the grammer and spelling arew okay but i dont really like how small the panels are, that the text is under the panel and that u mixed RSE Sprites with FRLG sprites which is a big no-no in my book. All the best, ~MS~

    EDIT: Also, give approaite credit for whoever you got the Pallet Town map from, unless you ripped it yourself, which i doubt you did.
     
    Nice comic! Its interesting... I hope you make some more soon! Keep it up ^^,
     
    The only reason the panels are under the pictures are b/c they would'nt fit, and thanks for the great comments yall, im maing a new one now...

    (Constructive critisism welcome! Like what Matt Silver said, thats constructive critisism)
     
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    Eh, the whole "Legendaries as a starter" idea seems a bit cliched. Also, I have no idea how many comics have started in the truck, but it sure is way too many. Plus, the "OMG im gonna go get ma pkmn now" (exaggeurated, BTW) Is... well... overused and kinda bland. Spice it up a little, and make it different from other comics!

    Positive: It's good for the most part! Good grammar(a few typos, but that's okay), no cheap resizing, and nice customized sprites. ^^
     
    Its Good, but I prefer to have each panel the same size, even if that means putting another colour around it. I Don't like the whole Ledgendary Starters thing, but it could turn out to be quite Good...(I wonder where you got Reloaded from? :))
     
    is this your first comic if so it is good for a beginner. The "We just got our pokemon let's battle"(lol) thing is old but it may work in number two so good luck with trying to keep making them
     
    Reloded? Its a new thing, X_X oops, it was suppoed to be like a better Kanto, thats what i was aiming for... i guess im going to have to change the name... anyways, it was supposed to be kinda like my RPG, except the setting is a new Region. I thought it was original... (BTW does anyone make affys? id like one for my comic... PM me if you would like to make one for me)
     
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    Great Job...

    Great job Dark-Umbreon! Cool! I'm in the comic! and in the credits! Thanks....
     
    What do you mean by a Affy, whats an Affy?
     
    A button, like when you click it, it goes to a URL...
     
    Oh an Affiliate Button lol...you should of just said...
     
    Id' like the official POKEMON sign thing, its yellow and blue you know? and Gold version Umbreon, remade and Gold version Espeon, You can cut them into boxes and put them in the corners, then around it make 2 lines, that intersect in the corners... Thanks Silver!

    (BTW: I had to make my own moves on my newest comic, which suck, so dont go too hard on me...)

    I've taken your critisisim into consideration and decided taht im going to trash these Comic's and create new ones... so if the somics dissapear, they'll be back soon... so dont freak...

    -Alisha
     
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    great comic and nice overworlds
     
    yeah, great redos... The lab was my idea... from my comic.... you can have... at least you gave me credit...
     
    here is my button, tell me if it works or not...

    [PokeCommunity.com] The Kanto Region Reloaded


    (BTW: Can anyone help me? I need Pokemon Moves, like pic's of them, as you saw, my paint-moves sucked... so if you'd like to help, just postt... ^^)
     
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    New Comic! check it out!

    -Alisha
     
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