The Ledgend of the Lightning Stone.

katfox2

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    In this thread, we will be able do a story about two little pokemon, Plusle and Munin who were abandonded by their own trainer! :'(
    But thankfully, they were rescued by pokemon known as Jolteon. :)
    The ledgend says if Plusle and Munin were touched by a lightning stone,
    they would become a very powerful pokemon in world!
    Even powerful than Mew!!! :confused:
    So Jolteon helps the small pokemon find the lightning stone to help them unlock the mystery of the evlovsion but, they would need help from other pokemon for their long joureny. They say that the stone was located on a island known as, Pikika island. So Plusle and Minun's destiny awaits them..... :chu:
     
    So I take it this is an interactive fic? If so, then count me in.
     
    It was a cold dark night at Poke city. But, Jolteon was right by their side protecting them from any danger. Plusle started to cry tears from her small wet eyes, thinking about her trainer. She could not believe her trainer would do such a thing.
    Jolteon told her that her trainer didn't need her any more because that trainer did not have a heart, who only cares about winning, and does not care about their pokemon.
    So...Plusle finally fell asleep on Jolteon's shoulder.
     
    This is really an RPG, since you are asking other people to write chapters in a story. Since it's still in FanFics though, I suppose I'll rate your "chapter" as a story.
    Well, first of all, you spelt legend wrong. That can't be a good start can it? In your first post, there wasn't any description. I couldn't picture Poke City at all. Was it raining? Was it night time? Anything? I'll wait until this gets moved to RPGs...

    ~ MCD
     
    Mr Cat Dog said:
    This is really an RPG, since you are asking other people to write chapters in a story. Since it's still in FanFics though, I suppose I'll rate your "chapter" as a story.
    Well, first of all, you spelt legend wrong. That can't be a good start can it? In your first post, there wasn't any description. I couldn't picture Poke City at all. Was it raining? Was it night time? Anything? I'll wait until this gets moved to RPGs...

    ~ MCD
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    Oops! I ment to put Legend not ledgend, I just made a type-o by mistake! :\
     
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